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by Anonymous

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by tazz31705/24/12

SUN INDICATES PEACE WITH ONES SELF

and going forward is a good think. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Desejo05/24/12

Song

This feels very much like a song- is it?

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by njoyjade06/03/12

Yes

Original version was a song. It was the "Son" who shined.

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