Loved it. What more can I say?
I like your stories alot. Keep on working and you can be one of the best.
first class characters and Paige sounds like THE girl for him.
I love the banter between Paul and Paige--they seem to be made for each other. Now that they've had sex, what's next. I guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out.
The dialogue in this chapter is professional quality. The witty banter would actually make an excellent sit-com script. Sexy too.
Great first time, very likable characters/dialogue, and hot.
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Fantastic
Loved it. What more can I say?
Not bad...
I like your stories alot. Keep on working and you can be one of the best.
great!
first class characters and Paige sounds like THE girl for him.
It only gets better
I love the banter between Paul and Paige--they seem to be made for each other. Now that they've had sex, what's next. I guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out.
Top notch
The dialogue in this chapter is professional quality. The witty banter would actually make an excellent sit-com script. Sexy too.
Loving this story...
Great first time, very likable characters/dialogue, and hot.
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