Loved it. What more can I say?
I like your stories alot. Keep on working and you can be one of the best.
first class characters and Paige sounds like THE girl for him.
I love the banter between Paul and Paige--they seem to be made for each other. Now that they've had sex, what's next. I guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out.
The dialogue in this chapter is professional quality. The witty banter would actually make an excellent sit-com script. Sexy too.
Great first time, very likable characters/dialogue, and hot.
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