All Comments on 'Coming Into His Own Ch. 02'

by PhantomOp

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jimijjimijalmost 12 years ago

looking forward to see what other adventures or troubles his ring can cause

enjoying the series so far :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I like it

Certainly an enjoyable read. Hope you continue.

I wonder if Tom will get corrupted by power or will he be able to control it

jon321jon321almost 12 years ago

can't wait for the next chapter

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
The chapter is a little short, but very good

It seems as if the ring could really corrupt him if he doesn't keep hold his thoughts.

Looking forward to reading more.

Thanks for the read.

randystonerandystonealmost 12 years ago
good start

you have a good start going, chapter length seems about right. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
cant wait for next one

Great so far hope you keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Story!!!

I really like it so far. I hope that there will be more chapters to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story

This is terrific. So much fun. Very sexy. Thomas is a well drawn character and I'm enjoying getting to know him better as the story develops. I was hoping for a special maternal b-day gift, hopefully that may still happen, but I really like the public nudity and sexual tension. Nice work. Looking forward to the rest!!!

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
interesting direction this story is going

The server from the restauraunt is a plot device that was sprung on us rather suddenly. I just wish he had asked his mother to go with him. She too is a member of the family and deserves to know about Tommy's heritage.

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