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Darkest Temptations Ch. 01

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by Queen_Vicki05/27/12

hmmm

Is this going to be a gay romance? great start btw just wish is was longer.

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by MizT05/27/12

I too wished it had been longer, but it's not bad considering how short it is. You told us alot about what is happening not just w/the 5 killed but also about the part the were's played in the past and someone wanting them dead now. You also have a mysterious female in the mix. I'll wait for the next chapter to see where you go w/this story. I hope you post very soon and w/a longer chapter.

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by shortydee05/27/12

Pretty Good!

i hope that the next chapters will be a little longer.

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by kitteh_kat06/07/12

okay...

i'm thinking:
vampire slayer, turns out to be our young (old) Demitri's mate?
i'm just wondering, this looks like a good one.
if the story doesn't conclude in the four chapters that you've already put up, then you best carry on this series in style!

k_k

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