She has to keep them both! The last 2 chapters were the best!
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Anonymous06/02/12
FUCKING HOT.
god, you made my pussy fucking wet! oh fuck, now i'm playing with myself. ooooh fuck babyy. anyone wanna fucking join me? ;D FUCK ME NOW!
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Anonymous06/02/12
Wow!
I cannot get enough of this series. It's so visual and simply amazing to read. I read all 12 chapters in one sitting and was literally sitting in a little pool at the end!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I just read through all the chapters, and this is amazing! :D I love all the characters and the universe you built up around them. And the sex is so hot! Just the right mix of tender, rough, submission and anal. And I really hope she doesn't have to choose, she is so great with both of them :)
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Anonymous06/03/12
Wow!!!
More please... I need more... Please
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Anonymous06/03/12
She has to pick Flood/Chris. Fire seems to think about outdoing his friend too much. And Chris is just a better pick.
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Anonymous06/03/12
What I like most about this series is that instead of just writing a short, badly punctuated story filled with slang and dirty, pointless sex, you've actually put effort into the story. Creating an intriguing and yet still hot atmosphere shows your class and pride as an author. A piece of literature rather than garbage. I hope you persu a hobby or career in writing, for your talent and knack shines through.
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Anonymous06/05/12
Talent
You are one talented writer. I'd love to see this published. This story I'd very fulfilling and I hope that she chooses Mr. Fire. Being an artist myself the idea of the supply closet was HOT.
Ok now what
This sTory just gets better and better bring on the trio class and well let's face it all the hot sex that will happen between now and then
Excellent
Agreed. Better & Better! (I still want Chris to win!). You should try to get this series published. I haven't seen anything in print this well done.
She has to keep them both! The last 2 chapters were the best!
FUCKING HOT.
god, you made my pussy fucking wet! oh fuck, now i'm playing with myself. ooooh fuck babyy. anyone wanna fucking join me? ;D FUCK ME NOW!
Wow!
I cannot get enough of this series. It's so visual and simply amazing to read. I read all 12 chapters in one sitting and was literally sitting in a little pool at the end!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I just read through all the chapters, and this is amazing! :D I love all the characters and the universe you built up around them. And the sex is so hot! Just the right mix of tender, rough, submission and anal. And I really hope she doesn't have to choose, she is so great with both of them :)
Wow!!!
More please... I need more... Please
She has to pick Flood/Chris. Fire seems to think about outdoing his friend too much. And Chris is just a better pick.
What I like most about this series is that instead of just writing a short, badly punctuated story filled with slang and dirty, pointless sex, you've actually put effort into the story. Creating an intriguing and yet still hot atmosphere shows your class and pride as an author. A piece of literature rather than garbage. I hope you persu a hobby or career in writing, for your talent and knack shines through.
Talent
You are one talented writer. I'd love to see this published. This story I'd very fulfilling and I hope that she chooses Mr. Fire. Being an artist myself the idea of the supply closet was HOT.
Very hot ...
Feels like being part of it ...
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