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All Comments on 'Poolside Fun'

by westcoastjohn

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dirt043dirt043almost 12 years ago
Loved it

Loved it looking forward to more of this story keep them Cummmmmming !!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

no buildup, predictable, boring

Formbdy2k2011Formbdy2k2011almost 12 years ago
Needs work.

This was a shallow story. You didn't develop the characters or the relationship with the mother.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow

Wish I knew more and did more at 18

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Short But Interesting***

Mom was easy. Thanks for the read.

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