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Toymaker Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by randymcmuffin05/29/12

a liitle short, but that just shows how much i like it when i dont want these to end :D

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by Ferrumitzal05/29/12

I like it

Training Keiko to be a slut in a very unique way. The writing is solid and I really like how you're conditioning the girls to become free meat for any man. Taking Keiko to the point that she thinks she's gaining some kind of metaphysical power for herself is funny because all she's going to become is a cockwarmer.

Brilliant and I can't wait to see how Keiko lives after the incubus has moved on to greener pastures.

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