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Deconstructing the Professor

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/30/12

WOW

I can truthfully say I have never read a story that long in one sitting. Your detail for history, your unique but believable set-up and your extreme characted worked perfectly. Like a good novel, I couldn't wait to get to the end and yet am already hoping for a sequel.

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by Anonymous05/30/12

How did this get approved?

Full of racist shit, covered from top to bottom in neo-Nazi propaganda and KKK theories masquerading as bullshit erotica. Fuck all you white readers who vote it 5 starts because it flatters your racist egos.

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by PoissonSurLaLune05/30/12

Too Much of a Good Thing? Nah....

It's always nice to see things from SilkStockingsLover, and seeing 22 pages from her is really really nice. The added space really let her carry out her ideas to their logical extremes (and by their nature, they logically tend to be extreme).

As far as the race thing goes... I can understand how another reviewer was deeply offended by it, but the author was pretty clear in her warnings. For many people, a big part of submission is pain, and nothing hurts quite like a racist epithet. One word, one comment and your reminded that your whole life people have looked at you as a deviation from the normal, that for a lot of people you'll never quite belong. It's powerful, it hurts, but it's the stuff fantasies are made out of. (As a side note, the author's line in the introduction about not being racist because she fantasizes about submitting to people of African descent kinda misses the point of racism; "positive" racism still marks a person as other and isn't all that fun to be on the receiving end of.)

Even though I accept that race tinged fantasies can be hot, I have to admit I had a few quibbles. The way Miko was the most readily accepting of the slaves and talks about her cultural conditioning brings up all the tired old stereotypes about Asians (the black characters embrace racial stereotypes out of a sexual need as opposed to having a sexual need because of racist stereotypes). So many other characters get a chance to show some complex ambivalence about the race play they find themselves in, why not her?

Wow. That was long. But it was good!

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by estragon05/31/12

This is A Tough One

It was tough to copy edit. And I'm not surprised that this novela will catch a lot of flak. I am reminded of a remark my late father-in-law made nearly fifty years ago: "Racism is the new pornography." Prophetic.

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by Anonymous06/03/12

Submissive black male can relate

I loved this story. I'm a black male who loves fantasizing about submitting to whites, male and female. The only thing that didn't turn me on was the incest.

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by bighank10006/03/12

wonderful

i loved the store from beginning to the end. could not get enough of it. must be the longest story i have ever read from beginning to end. had my black cock so fucking hard. i love them using the n word. the story was so hot reading as we get to see the down fall of a high class women. becoming a slave to a sexy superior white student of hers. her submission even includes having to watch as her daughter is taken by her student. helpless not able to help even her own children. the sup black women must except and do anything her dominant mistress wants.
the blackmail in this story was wonderful. the humiliation was hot and the taboo line crossing was to the best ever.
mis silk stocking lover your one kinky hot women. for you to think of this story and the use of all the forbidden words and acts. your mind it self could lure me into your control.
thanks for a wonderful story . its a dream cum true to read a hot story like this. i love it

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by Anonymous06/03/12

hellova ride ;-)))

ok i loved the whole story. i do enjoy well written sexually charged writeups. this was well done and skillfully woven...the family involvement, the personal dilemma in the central character. I did enjoy the "slapping to the face" and would have liked more of that tho. However, in reality and after wringing the cum soaked underwear during ,and after the story one has to ask..in the real world would this work ? can the "madison" of this this world bring down in real life well known popular black figures ? Has anyone done this personally to others or have that done to them? or is "madison" of this world only really succede to the weaker of them in reality. would love to hear back from folks at nebulas@yahoo.com xxx

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by Anonymous06/03/12

Editing issues

I enjoyed the story, but as a former editor, one thing bugged me - the inconsistency of the acronym NAACP. A minor issue, but it went around from NAACP, NCAAP and various other errors on it. Just something that stood out late in the story.

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by Anonymous06/10/12

Humiliation and Appreciation

As the black professor and mother who was the inspiration for this story, asked the author to write it and provided ideas, I feel a deep sense of both humiliation and appreciation, shame and pride. She wrote an amazing story that touched and aroused me deeply about things that have stirred within me and disturbed me for a long time and that I still struggle with day by day. That different people would feel and respond differently is hardly surprising--to me personally, given my own conflicted feelings; and socially, given the troubled history and current state of race relations. What really strikes me is how deeply beneath both pretensions of racial conciliation and expressions of hate the complex themes in this story still resonate, not only historically, but in popular culture today. The Other is the fearful, shameful, rejected, projected part(s) of ourselves. And the Other is always with us, no matter how hard we try to pretend OtherWise.

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by Anonymous06/13/12

nicely writen

nicely writen as aways

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by darklace06/20/12

Subersive!

So subversive! So dirty! So wonderfully, ecstatically, sexy! Thank you so much for writing a story involving race play where everyone is okay. More eager consent would have been better, in my opinion, but other than that it was great!

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by Anonymous07/13/12

story about miko

i would love to see a story about miko.

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by Anonymous07/30/12

need more

you should make keisha her sister nicole's slave and she should serve nicole and madison together

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by moggy12307/30/12

keisha and her mother

keisha & her mother should serve nicole and madison together and they both should be wearing collars with leashes.

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by Anonymous08/26/12

Devoted

A wonderful sex fantasy; I just loved the way you drew out the long descent of the seduction submission a little over the top at times particularly the ending but fantasy are often over the top.

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by leann51108/29/12

category?

Great story but tremendous amount of writing for a single vote and probably a lot of readers don't even bother with that. Just because ir's free, they think it deserves no compensation. Too bad people don't realize the well will run dry if the writers quit thinking anyone enjoys what they do!
But I wanted to comment on your indecision about the category. I'm sure it's too late for this site to re-organize such a collection of stories but the ideal would be to have four general categories - straight, gay, lesbian and bisexual. I for one, spend a lot of time searching sites for lesbian stories and I never read any other kind so I do not care about "group sex" "BDSM" "interracial" or any other category unless I first find out if the story is about lesbian group sex, lesbian BDSM, or interracial lesbians! Now I wonder if there are readers out there who ONLY like to read stories about a single category, say group sex? They only like stories about group sex and it does not matter if it's several men, several women, or a mixture of men and women? If there are people like that, then the present long list of categories I suppose makes some sense. But I really can't imagine someone with such a narrow preference. If the four general categories were used, they could all be subdivided into the list of categories.
The only problem would be combinations of lesbian stories and stories about gays or straights! But those would be placed in the bisexual general category and then the sub-categories could be explored. Of course a writer such as you with many threads running through your stories, would still have the same problem of having so many choices but the readers would have a somewhat more simple task.

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by AnomolousCowherd09/02/12

Wow...

Almost speechless. I'm not that excited by stories in which the interracial aspect of the hanky-panky is important, so perhaps I'm missing something. The D/S aspect was fun, but the relentless racial slurs, pseudo-scientific racial theories, etc. really reduced my enjoyment of the story. And yes, I know it is just a fantasy, and that I shouldn't take it too seriously. But I didn't enjoy it much.

Still enjoy SSL's other stories and rate her as one of my favourite authors. Just not this story.

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by Littleprick09/14/12

One of the best

You wrote a magnificent downfall. For 22 pages I was captivated to see what's next.
The only part I didn't like was with Allison (as Felicia apparently).
It could have had a little more incest (between Felicia and her two white children) and I'm disappointed Keisha and her mom didn't do anything together.
It's minor details for such great story. I'd like to tell the story isn't racist. Madison is (big time) and she submits four black women not because of her ridiculous theory on black people but because the four of them were sibmissive and loved the humiliation.

You are the master of the lesbian domination stories. Don't ever stop writing.

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by Anonymous10/31/12

Great read

This was a really good read, especially the part where the daughter was put in charge of the mother. I'm a fan of that sort of incest stories.
I like the idea of a daughter or son taking charge of their mother.

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by cantbuymy11/16/12

wow - great story and i got tons of shit for using nigger in a story under loving wives to make people think the character hated someone that they did not hate. 5

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by Anonymous12/09/12

Great story!

This is an amazing story! I've read it a couple of times and it's still great. I would love to see a sequel to this story, maybe involving Keishas life after her submission. I think that would be really cool, maybe she could even see her mom at the sorority in it.

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by Janice193901/18/13

Back to front,.

While the plot is interesting to believe a white sub would be able to turn a black woman is ludicrous. Being white myself and not ashamed of it. I totally believe that our black ancestors need more respect the word nigger should be changed to white trash. Which most of the population of Northern America falls under. You only have to look at their imbecile constitution allowing the bearing of arms, which makes all the murders possible that take place in that part of our globe. I like most lesbians world wide woul be honoured to be the sub of the anchesters that make our lives possible.
Love Janice

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by Anonymous01/18/13

Janice, old, anti-white racist idiot

Hey Janice, you are an idiot.

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by Anonymous01/24/13

Loved It!!!

I had no idea it would be that awesome through out the whole story, I'm a mixed 21 year old submissive woman and I didn't get upset that you used The "N" word. It is just a story after all and you even said so in the beginning that you didn't write it to be racist so I don't know why some of the other readers are angry. But some people are just childish.

I love all your work please write more.... or even me.
shekiaross11@gmail.com

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by Ravyn_JinxLilly02/05/13

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!

All I can say is wow, and amazing, you should most definitely use the great detail you have here for many of your series stories

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by fooshun02/13/13

Absolutely fantastic 'literature'! Could not tear myself from the story. Compelling, detailed, and magnificent method of crafting. Superbly stimulating and in my case, very relatable as I met an English professor who comes very close, very close to being this character. Exact same phyical characteristics, same psyche, same perceptions of the relationship between blacks and whites, same values of and desire to emulate white culture. All the while making a feeble attempt to mask her admiration by trying to maintain her 'blackness'. If I didn't know better, I would swear she was the model for this story. What timing as I just met her in November then out of the blue came across this story. I've read it over 4 times. Like the 'best sex ex' who serves as our 'go to' for good masterbation orgasm.....so is this story. Kudos.

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by Gerry123402/27/13

Loved it.

You can tell you put a lot of effort into this story. I couldn't stop reading much to my partners chagrin. Hope to read more soon. Love GerryXXXXX

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by Tims92203/17/13

Awesome

I couldnt stop reading it! Loved all of it! Great story!

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by Anonymous05/04/13

More!

Your stories of Black dominance are not appealing in the slightest. But this. The is a masterpiece. I beg of you to make more

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by KathrineZuta06/01/13

Wow...

I can honestly say this is one of the best works of fiction I have read for a long time, certainly the best i've read on literotica.

The way you capture so perfectly the conflicted emotions of the professor as she struggles to resist Madison's relentless attempts to make her submit. I would really love this as an ebook that I can read on my kindle :)

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by habebev08/02/13

awesome

Great story and very well written and organized. I loved the way you kept distingushing between the professor, Felicia, N slut...etc to show the level of submission. The one part that I didn't care for was the insect otherwise I love to read more of your stories.
Sorry I rated your story one star by mistake and can't chsnge it. It desreve at least four stars.

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by Anonymous08/29/13

Whites

White people don't understand the term racist. Have sex with your own race and leave our men and women alone. I liked your stories before this.

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by Anonymous09/17/13

Great Story

This story was well written, stimulating throughout, and each conquest was built just right. Not to fast or to slow. However, I could see maybe one individual falling under Madisons spell, but so many difficult to believe.

The overall story was one of the best on this site, so good going.

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by miklosfair11/05/13

Way too long

A semi-interesting story, but author suffers from literary constipation. WAY too long.

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by Anonymous11/14/13

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT

I loved everything about it, I loved the lesbian aspect of it as well as the incest, it was paced well and Extremely erotic. Riveting story. You are my favorite author on this entire website, keep up the great work. 5 stars!

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by Anonymous12/06/13

superb once again. you are at par with any literary writer. i especially love the lesbian incest in all your stories. this is a piece of art that only you have perfected. you are mind blowing. please don't stop. ever.

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by Anonymous02/16/14

Wow

To much for me, jumped before 1/3, glad for physics, Kirchhoff's, Faraday and like Hero's.

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Great Story...

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by Anonymous03/22/14

can you write another please

This was outstanding please let there be another

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by Passionisbest05/08/14

Over-the-top

No disrespect intended, but as much as I enjoyed all the sex, I thought the story was way too long. I was hoping the Professor would end it. Or end up with Allison. The number of people who succumbed was just too many. I guess I prefer a little more realism to my fantasies. However, I commend you on your tireless efforts.

Ps: I would be happy to edit some of your future work. Just the grammar and not the content. Presumptuous aren't I ? Lol

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by iceblock09/09/14

Personally I loved this story. I read before bed and will generally fall asleep as I read. Not for the first time one of silk stockings lovers' story has kept me wide awake. For three nights running I had to put this story down wide awake in fear of my alarm going off in just a few short hours. And here I am again tonight way later than what is good for me. Thank You so much for all Your effort in writing it.

Points I'd like to make regarding length, I don't think the whole part where the main character discovers she can't cum without being slutty at the end is necessary. But other than that, this story kept me captivated right through and I have a long history of getting bored with stories that drag on. This one did not do that. Regarding the very heavy racism, well there was good and very fair warning before the story even begins, I don't understand why people who are going to get upset by it even begun to read the story. I thought the racism was over the top but I had fair warning that it would be so can make no complaints nor detract from my rating of this story for that reason.

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by DarksideAshley10/18/14

Shamefully Arousing

OMG! This story was such a shameful, powerful turn-on for me! As an African American teacher, older sister in an interracial family, this story was such gut-wrenching, gash-drenching experience for me, it is difficult to describe the conflicted, addicted intensity of my reaction. It penetrated and humiliated me to the core, excavated and devastated me, yet left me craving more.

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by Anonymous11/17/14

Loved it, would love to see more like it. Don't change anything other than the players. Maybe some older women using and abusing younger black females.

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by bighank10002/22/15

deconstuction

you no this is so taboo. its so wrong to so many people. yet i have read it several times and loved it. it would be so hot and yet so taboo if we had more people to write more hot taboo stories like this. i bet stories like this could make millions. deep down inside many people its a super turn on to submitt.

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by spankfunfor08/31/15

Mistress' of black !

Not 'Politically Correct' But So Much Humiliation and Sexual Fetish, Had to Read and Play Several Times! A Side Story About Daughter's Ongoing slavery? Well Written, Well Thought and Excitement On Every Chapter!

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by Dreadlocks02/19/16

Well written

This may be one of the most degrading and humiliating stories I have read here. In a climate where black people seem to be rising due to political correctness and affirmative action, it was refreshing to read a story (it's fiction folks) in the opposite ilk. I especially enjoyed the epilogue where Felicia gave up everything to become a true slave, property, with no possessions. I'd like to know how you got it by the screeners, lol!

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by Anonymous02/19/16

I'm not a racist

Some of my best friends are niggers! You are exactly a racist. That's all you are about. You say you fantasize about submitting to a black man or woman. That's what makes you a racist. When you separate people because their skin is a certain shade, when you like or dislike people for that reason, when you desire them as sexual partners for that reason, you are a racist. It's pure and simple. You're sick, disgusting and you need mental help. As a black woman, I can tell you that you disgust me. There's nothing erotic or remotely cool about you or your sick fantasies. You have a mental illness and need treatment. The idea that you would be attracted to me because I'm black makes my skin crawl. You're just creepy, not sexy.

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by Anonymous06/12/16

simply amazing

seems well reserched...great read...look forward to reading more of the author's work.

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by Anonymous08/22/16

Apologies

I read this at the request of a friend who asked for my opinion. On behalf of the vast majority of white women, (and men), who consider racism to be repulsive, I apologize. I don't know what audience this site, or this writer is trying to appeal to, I'm perfectly glad that I'm not a part of it. In any event, I would never allow my name to be associated with such vile gibberish. I also don't know what part of this story was 'well researched' as a previous comment stated. From the Black mother somehow giving birth to White children, there is absolutely nothing factual, or even remotely plausible about the writers fantasy. For anyone who finds this acceptable, I suggest a visit to 'YouTube' and search 'White girl calls Black girl N*gg*r, before you try to put it into practice. Love you L, and I'm sorry you stumbled over this doggy-do.

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by dripstik09/14/16

One of my favorites

I read this years ago and just re read it and find it just as cock-hardening as ever! The scene where the professor is on al fours, MOOing like a cow for her White Goddess makes me blow every time!

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