All Comments on 'Redemption Ch. 02'

on your first series! I didn't realize that chapter 1 was your first submission to Lit so congrats on that too. I like this story. You have a couple different things going on in it. Who is attacking the pack and why is Justin overstepping his place. Are they related? Maybe Justin has found his mate? And you have kept the mystery of Annabelle going. And poor Brian, I do feel sorry for him. He has to worry about his mate and what she is or isn't involved in along w/his worry about his pack. I look forward to finding out the answers to these and I'm sure other questions that will pop up during your telling of this story. So get to work.....hehe-he

in two chapters, we have rouge witch's, a beta who just found a mate( and the mate has been abused i think) an alpha who knows something is amiss, and a raped she wolf, cannot wait to see where this goes and what else happens to complicate things

hope there more to come

You have alot going on here. I think you're brave for broaching the subject of rape. That is a tough one. I'm very impressed that this is your first series. It is well-written and seem to have a good plot that looks like it is gonna heat up fast. I can't imagine why Justin wouldn't tell his best friend and Alpha that the girl is his mate (ok at least I'm sure many of us are assuming she is.) I really wonder where she has been b/c the poor thing has clearly either been on her own or is abused. I do have to wonder though, is it a coincidence that she found Kendra? I think the way she was scared seemed pretty genuine so her story is prob true. Can't wait for more,