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tazz317 almost 12 years ago

EXCEPT FOR DEEP CARING

with that, what else is there. TK U MLJ LV NV

Tzara almost 12 years ago

Interesting and different take

on the erotic poem, particularly the narrator's attitude or thought about the relationship. Much better than the usual frantic, dripping body parts we usually get here.

Mo_B_Dick over 11 years ago

Flowers and orgasms, and a truth.

Apathy Fucking. I dare someone to brainstorm that one.

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A lot has changed since I began writing on this site 16 years ago as a wet-behind-the-ears 20-something — met an amazing partner, got married, started a business, and became a mom. Life with a kid underfoot doesn’t exactly make for much free time for sexy writing. I still da...

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