Between showing up corrupt judges and social welfare cheats I really know what you are hitting out at. Great story - with excellent character development and NO SPELLING MISTAKES, well done.
A very loving story between father and daughter, I see their relationship growing with time even a baby.
The part about the child support is so true, I had two ex-wives that fucked me over, one even moved to California without me knowing it (running from a bad check rap) eight months later I was arrested, went to court, luckily for me I had wrote her checks every month just never knew where to send them, charges were dropped, California also wanted to double my child support so they could recover the money she got from them, The Judge told them to go to hell (his words)
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Anonymous01/01/14
Holy F'n Mackerel
I like this story; "Feather" sounds interesting, hmmmmm
Your description of "Feather" was so well detailed and "real" that I could actually feel it. I don't know if "Feather" is something you made up or have actually done, but it is delicious. Makes me want to try it out.
I wouldn't mind hearing about the more intense version, too!
I also liked the fact that the relationship and sex was done lovingly, rather than all of this Daddy Dom/daughter sub stuff that seems to be so prevalent in a lot of other Father-Daughter stories here on Lit. Just goes to show that you don't have to be brutal to be passionate.
This was WONDERFUL again, would love to see you revisit this story line. Please keep setting the BAR higher and higher .
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Anonymous04/29/16
Holy Mother of God
"Even more intense" is going to be a very demanding Genie! You realize that's how BDSM became such a powerful addiction. Lovers crave more and more extreme, until they are expertly playing the roles of owner and user...mmmmm.
Father and daughter taking on those roles could birth a story entitled, "Unholy Mother of God,"
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Anonymous04/29/16
SailingSometiems...I see that you wrote your comment on New Years Eve - always a night of passion without limits. I agree that the author is setting the bar higher and higher. What I am hoping for in the future installments is, to see Sara's luscious teen body suspended nude from that lofty bar...
Sounds like personal experience
Between showing up corrupt judges and social welfare cheats I really know what you are hitting out at. Great story - with excellent character development and NO SPELLING MISTAKES, well done.
Great story
A very loving story between father and daughter, I see their relationship growing with time even a baby.
The part about the child support is so true, I had two ex-wives that fucked me over, one even moved to California without me knowing it (running from a bad check rap) eight months later I was arrested, went to court, luckily for me I had wrote her checks every month just never knew where to send them, charges were dropped, California also wanted to double my child support so they could recover the money she got from them, The Judge told them to go to hell (his words)
Holy F'n Mackerel
I like this story; "Feather" sounds interesting, hmmmmm
Thx;
DKP
Happy ending
Fuck that bitch of a x wife/mother. Good story.
I could feel it.
Your description of "Feather" was so well detailed and "real" that I could actually feel it. I don't know if "Feather" is something you made up or have actually done, but it is delicious. Makes me want to try it out.
I wouldn't mind hearing about the more intense version, too!
I also liked the fact that the relationship and sex was done lovingly, rather than all of this Daddy Dom/daughter sub stuff that seems to be so prevalent in a lot of other Father-Daughter stories here on Lit. Just goes to show that you don't have to be brutal to be passionate.
Very well done.
more more more
please write more love it
Well done.......again
This was WONDERFUL again, would love to see you revisit this story line. Please keep setting the BAR higher and higher .
Holy Mother of God
"Even more intense" is going to be a very demanding Genie! You realize that's how BDSM became such a powerful addiction. Lovers crave more and more extreme, until they are expertly playing the roles of owner and user...mmmmm.
Father and daughter taking on those roles could birth a story entitled, "Unholy Mother of God,"
SailingSometiems...I see that you wrote your comment on New Years Eve - always a night of passion without limits. I agree that the author is setting the bar higher and higher. What I am hoping for in the future installments is, to see Sara's luscious teen body suspended nude from that lofty bar...
i think there is something left undone here!!
very erotic little, and i mean little, as in verrrrry short,, incest tale,,,seems to be room for further development here!! just sayin'
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