All Comments on 'A Good Man Is So Hard to Find'

I guess a "good" man would be hard to find if you're serving up pussy like hotcakes being easy is an understatement. I hope at some point this is revealed as a dream sequence. No sane professional would every put their livelihood at such great risk. I understand about throwing caution to the wind you simply blew it to hell and back. Outside of all that this was great masturbation story.

Moved too fast, I thought, but still gave it a five.

I'm going to have to agree with the other commenters, the story moves a little fast. Granted, there are plenty of other stories that suffer the same problem, but this could have been so much more erotic if there'd been some build up in the sexual tension.

Now a few complications in their life like one of his Ex's wanting to come back or one of hers causing trouble for her and possibly her Mom would be a nice twist.

good effort.

I agree with the rest of the comments as well, the pace and the sequence of events are going TOO fast that it doesn’t seem like a natural fit for the plot of this story or believable even for fiction. Gia IS NAIVE; she may say she isn’t a mail room slut or using herself to get ahead but she IS. You can see why she gets taken advantage of and dumped in her previous relationships. I mean all of a sudden you are going to sleep with a guy you don’t know who said he can advance your career because he seems to have taken an interest in you… but she isn’t the easy right….LOL okay I guess everything is lollipops and rainbows in this character’s world. And Daniel comes across as a con artist to me, I know good males characters but he just doesn’t comes across as genuine, he seems to almost be fetishizing her nothing more or nothing less. I highly agree highly with Decadentdessert hopefully this a daydream or an entrance to the real FEMALE lead character or something because I can’t take these two seriously especially with the ending of I’ am falling for you…I mean really?... Why are they falling for each other exactly? I think you have promise and a great writer and I do think this story can be great with a few tweaking here and there

The pace doesn't always have to be slow.Some people are just magnetic and you feel an instant connection. I love the pace. It gets really frustrating when you have to wait for the fourth submission for a kiss. Seeing as how they didn't use a condom I HOPE GIA GETS PREGNANT. I would love to see the dynamics of their relationship with a pregnant Gia.

but for some reason i like the fast pace of the story there's probably more of a story to tell more problems and conflicts may develop. Keep up the writing and please update soon.

Yep, it's a quick pace, but is slow the only way to go? Variety is the spice of life. Some authors are slow, this author isn't. Keep writing, Cocoa!

hope you keep yhe stoty going would love to read more

While I like these two, they are both moving pretty fast. No wonder Gia has problems with men. A few kind words and one advance, and she is game. Daniel isn't being that smart either. One hot mail room girl and he's a wild man? As a partner of the firm, you'd think he'd steer clear of any behavior that might get him sued. How old are these two? Daniel, early-40s; Gia, late 20s... maybe. I had a hard time figuring this out since both seemed to behave like teenagers.

I would like to see how this story plays out. I have a feeling the other other partner(s) won't take very kindly to this union. Especially given her time on the job and his status in the workplace. I imagine that if Gia were to continue working at Daniel's firm, she might find the workplace atmosphere uncomfortable since it would be assumed that any accomplishments she received were directly related to her sleeping with one of the bosses. I could easily see her getting into it with another girl (or girls) that either tried to sleep with one of the bosses to advance and failed or because Gia has been deemed as nothing that an office slut that really didn't earn her position.

Looking for a good man or looking to get laid...????What is the rush or is she that needy?? Good story .. just slow down and let readers catch their breath

Very good story. It did move quickly but that does happen in life. I can't wait for the Sequel please let me know when it comes out.

Some people just can't accept a story for what it is, a story. It's not real life and even with real life, no one lives it exactly the same. Some are fast, some are slow. Just enjoy the story for what it is.

I want to meet a sexy white guy and have passionate sex with him. Watch his long thick cock slide in me and feel him suck on my clit. I luv this story.

The story seems a tad bit rushed, but who said everything had to take years? Good concept! I like this story a lot!

They met in the right place at the right time!He saw sex and love at the same time when he saw her.She was caught unaware but picked up that he was for real,especially when took such good care of her pussy and still treated her as a lady.When she realized he was a senior partner in the firm she delivered mail at she expected to be used and tossed aside.He showed her he cared even loved her and hope she could love him back.The sex scenes were great!The story was sentimental but write some more.

This is my fantasy, EXACTLY!! I don't think it happened too fast I feel like when they saw each other they both lost all control of themselves. I've had that feeling before only in my case it was a girl I was lusting after. Very well written keep up the good work! =)

A little cheesey, but I love the pure animalistic qualities of it.

I really can see these 2 becoming a thing!

On to the second part great detail love the sex, in this story...

Ok so let me get this straight...she went to deliver mail and ended up getting eaten out by a total stranger and we want to know why she is 30 years old working in a mail room a d living with her mother...because she is stupid....Yes the author should have slowed down to develop the character more. Its hard to root for a slut.

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Sometimes it happens fast. My husband fucked me unconscious on our first date.

Yes, maybe this story may move fast to some but I think it was still hot, aside from a few other things like him being so happy about the contrast in skin-tone while he's inside of her. I think that fetishism doesn't have to be a bad thing but it has to be done a certain way and within a certain context like maybe BDSM when it comes to how I personally find it appealing. Also, I think it can never be wrong if a woman has sex like all these people are trying to make out on here. Sexuality isn't bad. Now it may be unsafe or unwise or destructive, depending on how you go about it, but "bad?" No. Natural? Yes. Evolutionary? Yes. Also, there's sex for pleasure which is also evolution based. Things don't have to always lead to a relationship. "Slut" is a derogatory term used to shame women when it comes to them expressing their sexuality. The worst is when "feminists" use this term to shame other women. So hypocritical. Others on here said all the other stuff I already wanted to say which is basically that real life is not in black and white and doesn't happen like a paint the numbers book and that this is just a story and people need to simply suspend their belief, take it for what it is and get over themselves. It's meant to titillate, not fit your ideas of reality... Good job and keep it up. :)

Gia delivered mail and did not know his last name? She was in the man's office and there is no name plate? Makes no sense!

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Yes, yes, yes. Excellent. ""Oh Gia, if only you knew what you were doing to me with that body of yours" as he sucked on her cunt harder." I agree with others that the pace was a bit too brisk. But be my lover :-).