All Comments on 'Picking Up the Pieces Ch. 02'

Good :) I thought Peter was going to be a jerk but it looks likehe's willing to take babysteps with Jax.

Good on Peter and I wonder if he realises he has just found the button to help Jax can't wait to see how this develops hehe

i cant beleive i waited for this.? rubbish

I looked up to see how many stories you have submitted kinkyboots, to date none bitch.Keep up the good work sweet heart, cannot wait to find out why he has this phobia.

Good chapter...

And anonymous...more power to you..

*L*

Dinky, you pathetic fuck, I can sympathize with you. Seeing how often you comment and bitch like the useless douche you are I have no don't that all you ever do is sit on literotica and wait for stories to give meaning to your sorry existence.

Hey dinky, why the fuck did you read this when you said you lost interest in the first chapter? get the fuck over yourself, get a fucking life that doesn't include putting the writers on here down, so you can get yourself off the only way you can when you don't have the guts to write your own damn stories.

Lillywriting, I am enjoying your story, don't ever listen to the dinky dicks of the world, keep on writing.

Love it, keep it coming!

I have an OCD brother. This hits close to home. Hope Peter can help Jax.