All Comments on 'A Night at the Club'

by ausgirl2012

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juicycarameljuicycaramelalmost 12 years ago
Yummy!

How can something SO bad be SO GOOD!?!

phil2213phil2213about 11 years ago
One night stands can be impersonal yet in the moment

Indiscretions can be great moments full of sexual bliss where names are not associated with interactions but reactions to baser needs. Clubs in the 70's had reputations for great indiscriminate sexual blitzes. Unprotected sex can be a disaster in today's world due to the knowledge of the many catastrophic life changing diseases and conditions that never let you forget their origin. The story wasn't esoteric nor did it remind us of our parents guidance in such matters or our high sex ed class. The story was posed to appeal to the less rationale aspect of thinking usually referred to the Id mode of thinking. It works it is hot and it shows quite frankly and well illustrated casual wanton seductive impulsive sex with no emotion romance tenderness. With that in mind,the author slam dunked this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Mel to Meg?

Would be nice if you corrected that. I liked the flow of the story but I feel that the actual fuck should have been longer. A sequel would be nice. An entertaining read. Thank you.

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