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by tazz31705/29/12

SECRET WORDS AND VOWS

told by breath and caresses, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Tzara05/31/12

Rather nice

though the symmetry of the two main verses doesn't seem quite right to me, perhaps overdone a bit. Overall, though, nice poem.

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