All Comments on 'The Witch and the Dragon Ch. 13'

by LevanaHyll

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SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelalmost 12 years ago
^_____^ first to comment yeaaahhh!

wow such a fast upload after one and another the other day Devon and Angel today Zak and Luna (bear hug) thanks luvy (smoosh a kiss on ya) Have I told you lately that I luv your stories about the angels and tha gang? Enought talking I need to read it now. Might leave more comment later.xxxxxxxxxxxxoooooooooooooo

SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelalmost 12 years ago
oh no

pls don't have them have gruppsex. It will kinda remind me of Beverly Hills and Melrose place in a way, where in the end they all haven been sleeping with almost every body. An orgy with oral sex is kinda ok, but fullintercourse... well it kinda make it cheap like there is no point for them to have girlfriends or boyfriends at all except for breeding purpose. Then again this is your story, if it's in the story I will skip the group sex part and just read the rest of the story coz it's a great story. Pls keep up the good work.

TrixieFirecracker69TrixieFirecracker69almost 12 years ago
Haters

This chapter is pretty good. Dont get the low score, so don't let that discourage you LH. Keep em coming!!! ;)

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Chapter 14...

has just been uploaded, 9:37 pm, June 3rd, Sunday. Thanks for those who have taken the time to comment. I really appreciate the support. The next chapter is a scorcher where we'll be seeing more of Zak's Dom side again, so get ready ;)

LH

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