All Comments on 'A Moment in Time'

I enjoyed this first chapter and will be interested to see where you take this. I would suggest you get a proofreader because I found some errors that could easily be caught be a second pair of eyes. Keep it up.

I liked the characters and the setup. As previously mentioned, a few minor errors. There are a lot of ways the situation could jump and I would be interested in reading more. Welcome to Literotica.

good start . hope you continue with this series....

You made a nice start, now where are you going to take it?

to what I hope will be a sweet love story. Rather than a a tawdry one night stand. With that title it could go either way.