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I'm With Necroticgod
Seriously. What he said.
A very beautiful story
Very nicely done - stopped when it should have. What happens after is a different story.
True
Nectrogod is SO right
I can be a fan of brevity
but I also like to know enough to be interested. Name? Age? Anything?
no way
If you don't like the way it was ended then just don't read anymore of his stories and vote a "1" ! Simple as that.**
As for me I would give it a 2 1/2 if there was such a thing because there has to be a start and a middle and a finish or it is not a story.! Simple as that.**
I gave it a 5 just to help offset
asshole annony!!
Very Good
Not that I don't wish it was longer or had a few more chapters, but even without it's very good.
Unless you're talking about stroke stories, you need so drama. If the pair of them go on taking care of each other even after their parents divorce (or not) and nothing serious happens to them (i.e. they've already hit their happy ending) then the story is complete.
wow all we need
this has ben one of the good storys it tell s how the the love of to siblings can chaing
when mom and dad aren't there and that the btouther and sister find the love and
companyenship in each other when thing are bad at home great story five is to low
7 is what I score this at thing like this happen . keep wrighting
really love this author
I too am an erotic author. And incest stories are not my speed. I love the way you right them. It seems real. I feel like I am the characters. Great work keep it up.
Five stars as always.
Short story done right
This is how one should right a 2-paged story. Even with so few pages, Xarth's story still manages to be better than 90% of the stories posted on this site.
SUPERB !!!
What a great story of two people discovering each other---WELL DONE-
Fantastic
A short 2 page yet excellent work which most are not able to make.Good Work keep it up.The characters were believable the story was sensual as well as lovable
Regards DK
All We Need
I surprised with this story. Is well written, show all the taboo in a relationship between Bro and sis, the sex scenes are erotic, not porn and the story have a romance point of view. Have you in mind to write a sequel? What's happens with the parents? They are disappeared at the half of the story. What`s occurs the morning after?
Good job, go ever in the same way
excellent
This is very good. A rare 5 stars.
Good Read
It is refreshing to read a well written story on here. Lately it seems that people are just typing something out and submitting it as if that is all there is to writing. You obviously care about your writing and about your readers. Thank you for that.
I disagree
I completely disagree with the numerous commenters who have said that the male protagonist should have been named. Xarth did me a great favour by having Monica's dialogue and activities with him exclude his name. That omission allowed me to bask in the feeling that she was speaking to and acting with me. I don't have a sister named Monica (I don't, unfortunately, have a sister at all), but throughout Xarth's wonderful tale, I was able to experience the sense that Monica was that missing sister-lover whom I longed to protect and cherish, and the first person "I" of the story was indeed me, without the jarring complication of having Monica speak someone else's name to her brother-lover.
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