All We Need

Cool story

Such a good writer.

what happens next?

Good, but....

'disoriented' really?

finish

i hope you are better than 90% of the other writers here and finish your story. all of your stories need to be finished before posting anymore NEW stories finish ALL of the old ones.

To the four commenters so far in order

Thanks.

I dunno.

Yes, really. Unless you can elaborate a little more so I know what point you're trying to make.

Some of you guys need to understand that short stories are not novels. If you want sequels that's great, sometimes you'll even get them, but to imply that the story is somehow not finished... I don't know, what else do you want? What would make a story 'finished' to you? If 90% of authors allegedly aren't finishing their stories, maybe you're just not used to the format.

Excellent Read.

Well put together & thoroughly enjoyable. Fav'd.

Great Story

There's nothing wrong with siblings falling in love, incest romance is the best. I hope they become a couple. My father and I became a couple, there's nothing wrong with it .

Hell, I loved it!

Some of these folks need to stop and think what site they are visiting, before they make the comments that some feel they must make. A sequel might indeed be nice, maybe even desirable, but there was absolutely nothing wrong with your story as it was submitted. Thanks for what you do - FIVE STARS!

Good story.

Great job. You really did well.

A really sweet and loving story.

He may say that he won't let anything happen the next night, but if his naked sister slips in bed with him and rubs her titties on him, he will be ready for anything she wants.

A beautifully written story that I would love to read more of their becoming lovers.

Thanks for the read.

Isn't brother and sister love grand?

A job very well done! Congratulations! How could there possibly be anything wrong
with the love between this brother and sister. You took a controversial subject and treated it with sensitivity and insightfulness.Thanks!

Amazing!!

This was such a well written and heart felt story. Please continue!

Good

A second chapter would be nice.

Keeping it in the family

Nicely written. Do you plan a second chapter, perhaps with the pair 'forced' to get a place together when their parents split up and the house goes on the market?

More!

This begs for a continuation - at least one more chapter - please.

EXCELLENT

BEAUTIFUL LOVE STORY, DON'T STOP NOW

Another chapter please!!

Beautiful

This is one of the best stories I've read. However, unlike most other commentors, I think that this story should not be continued. It's perfect as it is now. A night of passion, of love without any restrictions, between a brother and sister. They will continue to love each other the same way. (I like to think that they continue the intimate encounters for sometime and gradually stop, but that's probably just me.) The process of it happening for the first time is where the thrill of a good story is.

You're the best

I love reading your stories. They're all filled with love. However, this one should be left alone. It is perfect like this.

A huge fan

Shame...

your stories are so short.

... That was precious. I feel warm inside :)

great

don't make another chapter cause this one ended just perfect with the bit of love and romance

beautiful

I have read a few of your stories and the ones I've read are amazing. I love that you really build a decent story before moving on to the sex. Too many stories on this site jump right into a taboo sex scene without any kind of awkwardness that would actually exist in such a situation. You, however, portray it quite well and with excellent emotion and sensitivity.

Beautiful Story, Beautifully Told

I really enjoy your style of writing. You let our imagination do the work and your stories thus are all the more satisfying. Thanks for such good work.

All We Need

This story just gradually builds from the gitgo to the consummation of their dedicated, committed and devoted total true love for each other. It is an unuallly sensual and so very elementary in that the love just sneaked up on them, after many years of them seeing it coming and not fully realizing it until it hit them like a gust of summer wind! The sister being 18 years old and the brother older, though we don't know his age, their love is a pure as the words "out of the mouth's of babes" in the toddling years.

Stupenduously gratifying to read a story that flows smoothly from front to back, easily understanding each sentence and paragraph and exactly what the characters are protraying. An extremely awesome story, as are the characters and the theme of the story. The love scenes are extraordinarily explicit in the explanation, with warmth and feeling and caring.

A Chapter 2 would be emotionally appreciated, as evidenced by almost 100 percent positive approval; the comments say so expotentially!!

Sweet and tender

I loved it.

Excellent, but what happens next?

We need more. The story was very good, but seems to have ended prematurely.

Ended To Soon

I loved how the brother was so sweet and protective of his little sister, but couldn't it have lasted longer??? He clearly love's, shouldn't that night have been longer, more drawn out???
Will a sequel be coming out??? I'd love to read what might happen next...Like she get's pregnant...

Sequel?

Really good intimate story! Are you going to write a sequel?

"all We Need:" - Monica and Unnamed Bro - (Sister and Brother)

This is my second reading of this fabulous story, the first time March 10, 2013, four months ago. My comments then are justly as aptly appropriate now, but at least two or three times more emphatically true!!

Disappointing is that through the two full pages the writer did not allow Monica to mention her brother by any proper name, nor even a childhood nickname, at all. She spoke and conversed and bantered with him, but was not allowed to acknowledge her dear lover-brother by any name!! Disappointing. Without addressing her sibling, her now brother-friend as a lover, it's not allowing her to express true, real tenderness and feelings for her brother!

Fortunately for the majority of Literotica reader's we have the fantasy facility that we can and do engage. In the case of "All We Need", Monica and her unnamed borther, we reader's will use our fantasy abilities to wonder, drawing our own conclusions, if Monica is now pregnant; are her brother and her still in love, as lover's; and as carnal incestual lover's; are they happpily "living as husband and wife every after?"; and have they, or will they, break the news of their consummated, eternal love to their parents?? OK Reader's! You are now free to use your imaginations.

What can be said.

A truly sweet story, Damnit I promised my-self I wouldn't use that hackneyed expression.
An excellent read. May I suggest you don't try to extend an effort which stands on its own.

nice

good story about human needs and situational ethics great sex scene too thanks

Very Good

I like how you start at a point right before they come together, but allow us to see how their relationship has gotten to this point. I, like others have mentioned, wish you would continue their story and show how they handle all that will undoubtedly try to get in their way. Maybe even bring their parents into the story more; either explaining what's going on, or having the sibling lovers try and help them work it out. Even if that is not to be, thank you for sharing this wonderful story! And keep up the great writing!

once again the asshole leaves us hanging.

if the readers need to think up a beginning and an end to a story then we don't need you hacks. this has no beginning, where is the background and character development? where is the end what happens next? do the parents find out? does she get pregnant? are they in school if so do they go together? if you don't know the story is not finished you shouldn't be writing in the first place.

You know I do it just to piss you off, right?

Like, you specifically. I think I can now consider my mission a success.

I was going to give this a 4, but...

then I saw the comments from the prior Anonymous and Xarth, and laughed so hard I had to bump it up to a 5. Nice Work!

Love this one so far. I hope there will be more. Keep writing. Needs more of an ending.

More please. This is not all we need, we need more.

Hahaha.

I laughed at the comment from Xarth too.
And I love the story dude, a brother and sister coming together through hard times. Personally, if it's done right (like this one) I don't really care about the background or whatever.. Though a sequel about them going to school together and experiencing & exploring different things (sexually ofcourse) would be cool, though I know that isn't going to happen!

5/5!

You're awesome

I like the way you write you're stories and how you present the characters. Keep up the good work.

Very tender

A superb short story! Loving and tender, like a morning raga. So beautiful it aches. Characterizations are excellent.

Understated Vividness.

That's a quality that's very very difficult to achieve. Xarth is an author , whose style sometimes hits & misses in terms of my taste, made it look effortless in this story. This is just a small gem whose perfection became more apparent with every passing paragraph.

More, Please

As LordSlamdawgg said, "a small gem". I loved it when I first read it, and love it even more the second time around. Though it would have been nice if brother had an identity. When I comment about a character its nice to give him/her a name. Most writers base their characters on themselves to some degree, even if they are made to be entirely opposite. This brother is someone who takes everything in stride, even if he dislikes it. I suspect that Xarth is a lot that way, since his male characters usually are. Like Monica, his females have a good deal of that about them, but with lots of feminine caring also. Which makes them worry more 'Probably reflects Xarth's feminine side. It also, as a reader, makes me identify with the characters.
I do want to say one thing to Xarth: More, please! I love your work.

Amazingly simple

The story may have only been two chapters but it was just long enough to tug on the heartstrings and tell the whole story. The ending fit in so well that it doesnt require anything more to make it feel complete. A wonderfully writen short story about forbiden love.

not too much

not too little.
it was just right.

what LSd said
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and now?

I like your writing style and your plots, but somehow your stories (as far as I read them) seem to stop at the moment it starts getting interested. In what way has what they have done changed their lives? Will they stay lovers? Has there been danger of her getting pregnant? How will their relationship and lovemaking develop? How about their parents? What will they do, when they find out?
Their life doesn't stop here you know...

A Nice Story

Nicely written - I really like your style.

what i have been looking for!!

It's a beautiful story. The emotion was there. I have been looking for stories that is'nt too much about primal lust but instead something emotional and connected. Not everyone comes here to get off, right? And thank you for giving me a story like this. It's something that i need right now, to remind me of certain things that keeps me from giving up.

yet another loser writer

once again we get left hanging by an uncaring loser writer. if you aren't going to write a complete story then don't start at all. stories need to have a BEGINNING yours was very weak. stories need a MIDDLE which this should have been but it needs to be longer with more detail. stories need a PROPER END where the characters figure out what happens next and how it affects everyone around them going into the future, you FAILED to include this in most of your stories. remember if the reader needs to think of any part of the story themselves then they don't need you so you are wasting your time and ours with your partial stories.

clearly the guy below me is an idiot. This is a great story with good emotion and connection. Many times its more interesting to see HOW they got there, as opposed to the fact that they did get there. Sometimes it calls for an ending like this. Other times it needs continue on. While this could be continued if you wanted, i think its perfectly fine as it is.