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Offspring Ch. 018

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by jamie11r19g2306/02/12

hanging

hanging on with baited breath for more ......

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by Anonymous07/08/12

drink beer and eat

All these guys ever seem to do is drink beer and eat... and wank! lol

Not a criticism as such, just an observation. Also, longer chapter might be a good idea too.

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