All Comments on 'Josh's Journal Ch. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Loveloveloveit!!!

Best I've read from anybody on here in a while...more?please?

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 12 years ago
Yeah you're back

I have missed this story and am glad you have had time to write again can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Have missed Josh and Ayden.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Glad you've returned to this story

Congrats on Hero. Will it be very different from what you posted here?

DonRDonRalmost 12 years ago
Heartwarming!

I enjoy your stories, and with this one you're making the characters not only sympathetic and interesting, but relevant enough to tug at one's heart. I wish I'd had stories like this as I was learning about myself, and that holds true moreso today ( - okay I'm older but not dead :-) ) . My only suggestion, driven by my enjoyment of your writing , is longer chapters. That may not always work with your outline, but readers like me always appreciate having more good work to savor. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
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KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ITS GETTING REALLY GOOD!!! HOPE THE NEXT UPDATE IS AWSOME!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
=]

Just read all your stories in this series and wow =] Definitely loving it. Also definitely gonna read all your other stories. But could you have Josh getting it in the ass by Ayden too? I was happy Josh blew Ayden first but I think it would be really great for Josh to "submit" in a way too. Not really submit but just so they know they're equals, not like Josh is the dominant one if you know what I mean.

Congrats on getting Hero published! Can't wait for more on Josh and Ayden! Off to read your other stories now... =] Thanks!!

mysealtheeclipsemysealtheeclipsealmost 12 years ago
More PLEASE!!!!

Congrat on HerO, where can i find it?

please finsh this series, i have read it about 5 times now, each time i pick up something different.

Deamon-Child

my seal, the eclipse...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please update

Im kind of really fucking addicted

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Can't wait

Omg I can't wait until the next story is out please make it fast please

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Beautiful

I hope you make more chapters,

with love

emo and scene forverv <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Damn

I'm kinda upset this isn't still going. It's only been a little over 6 months but I hope you get back into it. I really enjoy this one and I wanna see it through.

lonleylucaslonleylucasabout 11 years ago
i need to know wat happened

please don't leave us hanging we need to know at least one of us gay emo/scean/goth had a happy ending

ManzanaManzanaalmost 11 years ago
MORE!

We need more. This series is amazing. Don't give up on this series now! Think of Josh and Ayden! :'(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Big Surprise!!!

ANOTHER UNFINISHED STORY ON LIT.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
AHHHHHH!!!

i seriously hate this unfinished business, and its allways when they have you hooked :( depressing.... besides that loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Shit come on

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More, PLEASE!

We all love Josh and Ayden, we don't want it to stop yet, please please please don't let it end yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
LOVE

This the kind of stuff that just brings in joy in peoples hearts. It's soo pure and romantic, just beautiful, please continue with the series :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please finish

I likes the series but wish you add more chapters. Would like to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Add

Add more please!!! This is a really good story thxs writing it :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
U R AWSOME

I read all 13 parts of your story and loved all of them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
The Best

The best story I've ever read on this site. Love the characters so much. I've laughed and cired. Amazing work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Makes me cry and laugh

Omg this story is so touching, makes me laugh and cry and so happy! I'm so sad the series is over!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

ANY MORE COMING .?

wawferwawferover 7 years ago
Omg!

You got talent!!!!! I'm definitely going to buy Hero. Thank you for entertaining the masses with your writing I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter 😊

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
"Amazing"

Thank you!!

roboticshadow13roboticshadow13almost 4 years ago

Love this story! wish they're were more chapters but nevertheless one of the best stories on the site.

White_Daddy96White_Daddy96over 3 years ago
Please

Please write more this is hands down the best story ive read in here

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's awesome,I love the emo look,this is as touching as it is exciting.i hope u continue this story,I want more.

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