This is one of my favourites; he is clearly in control but doesn't need ropes or downtalk to prove it! Loved the way you showed both characters and interesting to use his point of view makes a nice change!
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Anonymous07/16/13
I agree
I did like the fact that you used his point of view. I'm a female so it's nice to know the guys perspective.
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Absolutely Loved It!
This is one of my favourites; he is clearly in control but doesn't need ropes or downtalk to prove it! Loved the way you showed both characters and interesting to use his point of view makes a nice change!
I agree
I did like the fact that you used his point of view. I'm a female so it's nice to know the guys perspective.
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