All Comments on 'Black Out Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
ohhh noooooo

I was just getting warmed up reading it. Really great writing. Love the story so far.

Waiting for the update.

honestsoulhonestsoulalmost 12 years ago

superb..! Pls don't laeve us hanging too long..

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 12 years ago
Getting interesting

If Rafe is a Vampire though and that package was for Ricky how did Rafe not know what happened? Now Nicholas is in danger what will he do??? Can't wait to find out soon:):)

LillywritingLillywritingalmost 12 years ago

Uh oh.... How is he going to get out of this one? I can't wait to read more and find out!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
OMG!!

This is sooo AMAZING!! :) Please continue to indulge me in such beautifully written vampire/human story. ♥

canndcanndalmost 12 years ago

Great start. I'd like for you to explain how he can check up on him. Can he read his mind? I wonder so that I'd know if he could save Nix. I'd like to know more about what a half-breed has in terms of vampire characteristics. Does he have any of their abilities? The only thing is that I'd like to know about the vamp law that put him in this position. Why is there no self-defense in the Vampire world? I can't imagine no vampire ever kills another vampire.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hurry

Please hurry and post the next chapter I need it!! Jk but i would really like to read what happens next!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More please.

I really hope that you will continue this story,

nuckin1futsnixnuckin1futsnixover 11 years ago
come onnnn!!!!!!!!!

wtf i was holding my breath for rafe busting in like an avenging angel to save his boy and all i got was fanged..still loved it plz finish i can hardly wait

nuckin1futsnixnuckin1futsnixover 11 years ago
p.s oh yhea

im nixie nuckinfuts nix lmao

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please continue this story I luv it..plz pretty plz

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More!!

OMG please continue the story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Finish this story please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good job taking care of him

ASSHOLE! Oh, and while we're on the subject, many rape victims have had their bodies used against them. This is one of the main reasons for guilt and self blame, and how so many misogynist assholes were able to convincingly blame the victim at trials. This is bullshit. And, btw, not a romance. I'd suggest looking up the definition. Sex is not love. sex is not romance. Sex can be beautiful if done right. Sex can also be disgusting, meaningless, degrading, violent, and traumatizing. These are all mental. So it's not appropriate to separate the mental and the physical responses, unless the goal is to further traumatize him. After all, he had legit reasons for avoiding reality with drugs.

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