No sense of writing and simply lost track of what is to be written. Lost focus on the primary objective. Writter probably jacking off his own fantasies while writing the story...
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Damn Poor !
No sense of writing and simply lost track of what is to be written. Lost focus on the primary objective. Writter probably jacking off his own fantasies while writing the story...
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