All Comments on 'A Dish Best Served Cold Ch. 02'

Gimmee, gimmee, gimmee more! Yes, I'll wait (pout).

grand-daughter (granddaughter)

hers and other's (others’)

ladies room (ladies’)

break room (breakroom) (2)

she'd had to cut the balls off one of the foremen (IF THIS IS LITERAL THIS WOMAN BELONGS ON JAIL OR THERAPY OR BOTH!!!! IF NOT, IT SERVES NO REAL PURPOSE IN THE COMMUNICATION PROCESS!!!!)

less than four or five (fewer)

any more (anymore)

cold hearted (cold-hearted)

dick head (dickhead)

hand between her (legs)

pantie-covered (panty-covered)

thighs as long as we both work here (ANOTHER MEANINGLESS PHRASE!!!!)

make up (make-up)

g-spot (G-spot)

This a work of fiction. Stop picking it to bits. You did with chapter 1, now you're at it again. If you can do better, then write a story yourself.

Otherwise just shut up and go read another story. Your winging is getting on my bloody nerves.

Just do one - will you !

This Arsehole is seriously pissing me off! Obnoxious; Pedantic; Ill bred; with the mental age of a self centred-narcissistic four year old. If you don't like the work, don't bloody read it! Otherwise keep your puerile, idiot, non-constructive quasi criticisms where they belong. Firmly buried in the unfathomable depths of your tiny; little; nasty mind. In short, GET A LIFE! Or a gag. 😷

Hi Julybear 7, keep up the good work, I love your stories and look forward to seeing many more appear on these pages. Good luck and cheers. Den

OMG Mr. annanymouse of 5 years ago, there you went again, being arrogant and tactless. Why are you so pissed off? Are we needing to feel Powerful and Superior again, are we? Are you an English professor that didn’t make tenure for some unfair reason? The fact that you are Anonymous showed what a coward you were. I have 100 times more respect for this writer, who has placed his/her work out there for all to see, than I have for a s*d like you. IMO, this is an interesting narrative regardless of any mistakes.

Love it. AAAAAA+++++