All Comments on 'A Little Siren'

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wildsoulwildsoulalmost 12 years ago

Aw, this story seems very cute but it reminds me of the little mermaid.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Too short

but otherwise fine.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

something smells fishy. i mean seriously fish and were mating? oh what one of them has to make a deal with the witch right then they can be with each other? please i read this when my daughter was a kid and bought the movie too.

crazysexykool93crazysexykool93almost 12 years ago
Reading is Fundamental, People!

The author clearly says 'based on the little mermaid'. smfh. Anyway, I thought it was really cute! Even though everyone knows the story, you put a little twist on it, and I can't wait to see what's next!

blahblahblah69blahblahblah69over 11 years ago

pleease !! write more!!

LaSaliaLaSaliaover 11 years ago
Cute

That's a match I wouldn't have thought of, ROFL! Inventive!

Speedy1106Speedy1106over 11 years ago
????

Hey liking the series stories so far, just curious as to why you are leaving us hanging? Please can you finish them. Want to know what happens with all the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great start

I really really hope you continue writing especially since I would absolutely love to know what happens next!!

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