Aw, this story seems very cute but it reminds me of the little mermaid.
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Anonymous06/04/12
Too short
but otherwise fine.
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Anonymous06/04/12
something smells fishy. i mean seriously fish and were mating? oh what one of them has to make a deal with the witch right then they can be with each other? please i read this when my daughter was a kid and bought the movie too.
The author clearly says 'based on the little mermaid'. smfh. Anyway, I thought it was really cute! Even though everyone knows the story, you put a little twist on it, and I can't wait to see what's next!
Hey liking the series stories so far, just curious as to why you are leaving us hanging? Please can you finish them. Want to know what happens with all the characters.
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Aw, this story seems very cute but it reminds me of the little mermaid.
Too short
but otherwise fine.
something smells fishy. i mean seriously fish and were mating? oh what one of them has to make a deal with the witch right then they can be with each other? please i read this when my daughter was a kid and bought the movie too.
Reading is Fundamental, People!
The author clearly says 'based on the little mermaid'. smfh. Anyway, I thought it was really cute! Even though everyone knows the story, you put a little twist on it, and I can't wait to see what's next!
pleease !! write more!!
Cute
That's a match I wouldn't have thought of, ROFL! Inventive!
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Hey liking the series stories so far, just curious as to why you are leaving us hanging? Please can you finish them. Want to know what happens with all the characters.
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