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Unleashing The Older Woman

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/04/12

another

wonderful and loyal spouse, not

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by Anonymous06/04/12

Good, But

Good story, but don't change from 1wt the third person so quickly as you lose your reader's focus.

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by Anonymous06/04/12

obviously the 1st vs. 3rd person viewpoint is lost on this writer...boring story.

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by Lickideesplit06/05/12

Use the Editor option!

LIT offers volunteer editor service to authors to help with the mechanics of writing. Recommend Venice take advantage of that fine resource!

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by venice52706/06/12

aww...so sorry Lick......

and I do agree with you but I think you'll get over it

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by digdaddyrich06/08/12

I can only imagine that it would have been very exciting for a mature woman to experence what she did.

Perhaps she will loosen up a bit and will try to experiment with other ways to have sex with men besides her husband.

She may not want to be a slut with her husband, but she might enjoy being a slut with a stranger.

A good story, thanks for the read.

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by dirtyoman08/07/14

About time Granny!

So now Granny can go & get leasons in fuckin & suckin very wed.. Love the potential of this 1pager. Tell us some more. I enjoyed this & look forward to more Granny adventures.

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