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A Hymn to Aphrodite

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by estragon06/04/12

Nice Beginning, Needs to be Filled Out

Good concept, nice writing, especially the scene between Aphrodite and the nymphs. But could use some more scenes during the two weeks they're together. Two tiny quibbles:

All gods, all men are subject to my domains.|Suggest All gods, all men are subject to my decrees.--Decrees are orders, domains are territories.

virgin that I am an inexperienced in making love,|Should be: virgin that I am and inexperienced in making love,

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by wilhelmrosenkrantz10/16/12

Good, honest shagging!

Sex in the countryside amid Nature's fecundity - how wonderfully earthy. Another well written story, another original angle on erotica, another imaginative and refreshing take on nobs, knockers and naughtiness. I think your stories really stand out from the common herd (he said grasping your bovine idiom) and I do enjoy the mythology and classical allusions. Super!

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