by Jamie_in_dresses
I hope you add to this story, it has all the pieces for a long hot summer tale with many chapters!
I thought that this is a good story, sweet in its way and well written.
You have to give us more of this. I can see so many directions it could go, one of which ought to be his deflowering Mrs. Stanton's daughter at her request, possibly dominating the girl in the process.
The older woman gets a youthful virgin boy and breaks him in with just the correct moves and juices.
It is truly refreshing to read a well written story that reaches a successful conclusion without droning on for page after page!
First sentence - brilliant - powerful and we knew where we were.
Continued with knowledgeable clarity.
A simple and beautifully described sex scene without the porn.
A terrific place to stop and a perfect length for a sunny afternoon read.
Simple... 5*