All Comments on 'A Dream Cum True'

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Tnnurse57Tnnurse57almost 18 years ago
If only

If only life could be like that..just the right mix of passion, desire, and romance...very very good!!

christinelouise13christinelouise13over 12 years ago
Nice First Time

It was good. Very well written. Would have liked to see the romance play more of a role as well as the competiveness between the two at the beginning. Perhaps, had they taunted each other a little more throughout their game, it would have led to more intense passion on the rug in the den. Overall though, I liked it. I'll be reading more of your stories over the next few days. Bravo!

TwilightfanTwilightfanalmost 12 years ago
Sweet

I love stories like this, where the guy is sweet, loving, and gentle, giving the girl what I consider the perfect first time...

TwilightfanTwilightfanalmost 11 years ago
Sequel???

Beautiful story... How all first time's should be... Have you considered writing a sequel??? Where they go from there, do the stay together or go back to being friends???

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