Beautifully written, very descriptive of the "physical," but the "mental" wasn't developed or given sufficient rationale. It makes you wonder "why" Not "Romantic" More "Erotic Coupling" Keep them cumming
Well written, but sad. A woman adrift after the loss of her love and her future does not look bright. Too casual, too careless, too uninhibited and lots of self destructive thoughts.
and delightfully written. Meaningless sex buried in memories of what might have been. I know the feeling. Fine writing.
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Beautifully written, very descriptive of the "physical," but the "mental" wasn't developed or given sufficient rationale. It makes you wonder "why"
Not "Romantic" More "Erotic Coupling"
Keep them cumming
Well written, but sad. A woman adrift after the loss of her love and her future does not look bright. Too casual, too careless, too uninhibited and lots of self destructive thoughts.
Most evocative
and delightfully written. Meaningless sex buried in memories of what might have been. I know the feeling. Fine writing.
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Back to I Could Be Anyone or
More submissions by rebecca_mcphearson.