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All's well
that ends well. Especially if it was a good read getting to the end. And it was. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Second time through...
Thanks for the offering.
Great Plot
Very well written, actually plausible. Nice to include small details that make reading enjoyable. Keep up the good writing.
a great read!
I must say I really enjoyed this story great job DJ a real 5 star iv added to my favs.
REVENGE ISNT ALWAYS THE STRONGEST NEED
to guess the next one should be EZ. TK U MLJ LV NV
REVENGE IS A DISH BEST SERVED COLD
From the star trek 2 movie! Great job on the story of Infidelity, cuckold, finding new love and so on! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
Absolutely stupid
He gets revenge on one of the guys who fucked his wife by fucking the guys mom and then sitting down and having beers with him. 'He's not too bad of a guy once you get to know him.' That's just fucked up. Secondly, her saying 'Oh Jimmy, I can feel it building up inside me...' is about the dumbest thing I have ever heard. A totally fucked up story about a bunch of redneck hillbillies that would fuck their own sisters if they had a beer to split between them. 1* was generous.
Read the complete story
This is fiction remember don't get upset. Bens mother willingly screwed a total stranger so she wasn't embarrassed or hurt just well screwed. Bens mother also suprised him by giving better than she got and if Kathy didn't bust a move fast enough Bens mother may get one more visit. The truce he formed with Ben after being with his mother WAS better than fighting. I don't see how that makes them need to be compared to REDNECKS some rednecks are very decent likable people that are not stupid, violent or fuck their siblings and other relatives. Read the complete story not just look at the pretty words. Mary Ann was wrong and she knew it, Jim and his buddies were all punks and they knew it. Ben was the only one that came to terms with his actions. He got some satisfaction but, revenge those people not with what he did to hurt them. His revenge was to live happily ever after with Kathy.👍🏼
Some people have to see
Some people have a need to see their words in print. It's easy on this site to just say anything and POW there it is! The comments are supposed to help the writer. The writer puts the storyline to writing if they make a error identify it. What makes you think any idea what they put to print is stupid or worthless. Even if you are some type of super computer brain remember garbage in garbage out. Point out the errors and save the worthless insults if this hurts your feelings shut up unless it's about the writing.
A good read
Enjoyed it
I'm not to sure about this story
Sorry, but it seemed too much like a bunch of junior high kids who haven't learned very many dirty words yet and say "Poot Butt" to antagonist. so 3*s for no clear story....
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