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by tazz31706/03/12

WOULD A CLONE OF ANY

be a match for some. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Ashesh906/03/12

The inexorable Law of Karma , baby....

It's the inevitable axiom : do unto others as thou wouldst have others do unto thee !!

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by Tzara06/06/12

String theory?

I like this, though "spacetime spaghetti" seemed a little silly for the poem in general. That's perhaps just me, though.

It also made me think of the Flying Spaghetti Monster.

Interesting poem.

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