I looked through all of the Comment's. Just to be sure I wouldn't repeat Myself. But for the People who got upset at the Ending. You really thought he was going to take her Back. I admit in the Beginning I thought the same. But when he had the P.I. get Pics & Audio he and We knew it was Over. I liked the way he Dealt with Wife & Lover. as for them getting together again Who cares she is out of his Life and His wife will be getting a Good share of his Earnings for awhile. They good become Room Mates.
English
Welll
I looked through all of the Comment's. Just to be sure I wouldn't repeat Myself. But for the People who got upset at the Ending. You really thought he was going to take her Back. I admit in the Beginning I thought the same. But when he had the P.I. get Pics & Audio he and We knew it was Over. I liked the way he Dealt with Wife & Lover. as for them getting together again Who cares she is out of his Life and His wife will be getting a Good share of his Earnings for awhile. They good become Room Mates.
Don't comment
If you don't finish a story Anonny 1/3/17, don't comment. You were completely wrong about him. Great ending. Bam! Divorce! Goodbye!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Divide and Conquer or
More submissions by FrancisMacomber.