All Comments on 'Joining the League Ch. 01'

by BenjiBright

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very interesting

Curious what will happen next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Different and funny

I enjoyed that one alot. It was very amusing and a nice break. I liked how this guy could have stopped it (and really, what guy would? :) which made Nick not feel guilty for using it on people. I hope when you continue that you do 'keep it real' in terms of explaining how he gets over the shame and guilt he feels in forcing people to become sexually excited and it seems, make it better than usual. I can't wait to hear his name. Really fun piece. I look forward to seeing more of these two working together too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Sexy

Make another story like that!!!!

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