All Comments on 'Cabin Essence'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Incest story teller turn cuckold

At least in the former you share among family members but this one is of wife sharing/gang bang,the husband is a wimp.today most of the LW submission is on cuckodery.More craps and it is getting monotonous reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hmmmm

I am female and kind of like this idea. I wouldn't mind being used as a fuck slave at all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hubby

Needs his dick removed he is no longer a man. He can be fucked by the boys also.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
a flowery comment from

a 'delicately decorative flamboyant' commenter, perhaps even 'florid'

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 12 years ago
Quick (and not that dirty)

Flash tale with not a lot of 'blow by blow' (sorry!) detail, but it sounds like a fine week for the guys, and a real eye-opener for Sweety!

4*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Well OK - we have one wife whore and several wimpy pimps commentating

almost a home run except there were only sick losers including you writer.<P>

Stay away from male humiliation and maybe win a few human readers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
not OK - several pimply wimps commenting is not enouogh

need more closet cucks commenting, reading and spanking first of course. go cuckboy, it's your birthday!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
why all the angst?

I enjoyed the harmless fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
WTF is wrong with you people?

"I read a sex story and something immoral happened! I'm shocked, shocked I say!"

The only feedback I'd give is that I liked the story and I wish the bitch would have taken in the ass more graphically. One guy likes it rough, one guy likes it in the ass, but we didn't get any details. Luckily I have an imagination.

Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love it!

Sounds fun to me, I'd love to have 4 guys at my beck and coll for a week!

Scorpio44Scorpio44almost 12 years ago
I laughed!

The style and voice of this "story" made it read more like bragging than a story. The best laugh came from reading the comments. Anonymous seems to need to label authors based on the content of stories they write.

Does that make G. Rodenberry an alien?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good job!

Odd comments aside, you fulfilled many a woman's AND husband's fantasy. Sharing your love and lust is certainly not a bad thing. Complainers and whiners need not comment, just move on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

When did husbands stop being men in America? This story is a perfect example of how American men have forgetten how to be men and the thier wives learned how to be whores and sluts, good luck to America.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

good premis needed more substance maybe more detail... im no author and couldnt even do this good just felt like it ended as fast as it started. some lead in character depth is always good

NawtyMeNawtyMeover 9 years ago
Hmmmm,,,,,,,,

Loved this story. Then it ended abruptly. I'm favoriting it becuz of it's story and content. It was too short.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
GANG BANG WHORE

I'm not into letting my wife fuck any other man or men it is not in our nature (clean or not) But we are not prudes, each to his or her own they are their own persons. Just to say if their were 50 men available I wouldn't share and my wife wouldn't be willing we both treasure our marriage vows as sacrosanct.

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