All Comments on 'Taking the Good Girl'

by YogaVixen

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I felt it, wow!

What a thrill, up the ass, so tight, and she came too.

angelx602angelx602almost 12 years ago
Nicely done

Very nice first time story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
very hot

I loved it. I have personally experienced some of this but not all the way like this. I would love to be taken like this one day.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Cunny

I haven't heard or read that word used in 40 years. It is good to see it nevertheless. Hopefully is makes a comeback. Your story is a good start. The world will be a lesser place if we lose cunny.

Hot story, by the way.

agelesssoneagelesssonealmost 12 years ago
Anal sex and squirting

That is the only way my wife can/will orgasm, via anal sex AND she squirts like crazy. And here is an interesting FACT....her ejaculate is extremely SWEET. I have no idea how a fluid coming out of her vaginal opening is sweet, but it totally is. I love eating her when she squirts, although I haven't had the pleasure of her squirting in my mouth as I am usually behind her during anal sex when she squirts. She never has squirted while I am eating her or making love to her vaginally, no matter what position we do.

There's always hope though, right?

DeborahAnneDeborahAnneabout 11 years ago
The taste is so good!

When your woman ejaculates into your mouth when your licking and sucking on her it does have a sweet taste. I really love to read these types of stories, actually I read a lot of them, the precum that gets my panties so wet has a good taste too. I love to fuck my wife then drop down and lick up our mixed jucies. da.cd@frontier.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wrong Section?

This was well-written, but I do think it should perhaps be in the non-consent/reluctance section.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I love the way you describe Liz's changing feelings over the course of the event. It makes Tony's occasion interjections seem surprising: we're in Liz's head, then we hear Tony talking and suddenly remember that the story is narrated ostensibly from Tony's point of view.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
!!!OMGawd

That was so fucking HOT! I nearly came just reading it. Too bad my hubby won't do that for me. *sigh* He's too afraid of hurting me, but it hurts sooo good! Please keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Stroke Man, Stroke Man...

Bet she was a brown-eyed girl...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Squirt

This story had my squirting in the first few minutes

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

wrong section it should be non con

good choice of word

really hot ans steamy with a romantic caring mdom and sweet fsub

but highly unrealistic for a woman to come from anal in her first time that too undeclared sudden and from mostly unprepared anus

also the guy is highly abusive twisted partner

rape is rape no matter how many times the victim comes

this wasnt consexual anal

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So perfect. Thank you.

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