I have commented on your work before and this story is no different from the rest, with regard to excellence. I love how your mind works. Your attention to detail is just right. Not too much to confuse or bore, and not so little that we can't visualize it as if we were watching a movie. To anyone who reads this, take the time to read the other submissions from this author. You won't be disappointed.
5 stars, as usual.
I would like to see more chapters. There's so much potential for some really hot stuff. This was a good start, but following up with some action would be great.
Wish you would pick this tale back up. I think there is a lot of potential in those caves for David and Macie, even if you don't continue actual events...
This is the 3rd story I have read by The _Technician. They have all been somewhat unnerving, but possibly addictive. I suspect that I will return to your work periodically in spite of myself. Thank you. .....I think?
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Typical
I have commented on your work before and this story is no different from the rest, with regard to excellence. I love how your mind works. Your attention to detail is just right. Not too much to confuse or bore, and not so little that we can't visualize it as if we were watching a movie. To anyone who reads this, take the time to read the other submissions from this author. You won't be disappointed.
5 stars, as usual.
I would like to see more chapters. There's so much potential for some really hot stuff. This was a good start, but following up with some action would be great.
More!
I don't care if you have to completely make it up. I would love more chapters! I want to read more about David.
Wow
Great story, very well written & the plot was well formed. Thanks
Anticipation
Wish you would pick this tale back up. I think there is a lot of potential in those caves for David and Macie, even if you don't continue actual events...
Needs More Chapters!
Nice read, just to the good parts and it ends in midair/bondage! :-)
anytime
I would love to find someone tied like that
Surprise.
This is the 3rd story I have read by The _Technician. They have all been somewhat unnerving, but possibly addictive. I suspect that I will return to your work periodically in spite of myself. Thank you. .....I think?
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