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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/11/12

Erotic Couplings

Unless there's a long sequel about him trying to get her back, this isn't Romance, it's Erotic Coupling. Great story though, I personally think it deserves some more. By that, I mean instead of "so I moved on", he likes her more than that, and tries to get her back. I'd leave the specifics to the author, but I think it would be more interesting, as it would push you to develop the characters some more.

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by Sidney4306/12/12

Yeah, he should have realized she was just using him as she was way out of his league. Oh well, some pussy and some memories, but I suspect he is better off without all the family drama and if he had looked in the dictionary, her picture would be found beside the definition of high maintenance.

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by LuciferPeters06/15/12

Well at least someone got the point

From the author - The guy was completely outclassed. And she was using him. Chasing after her could bring nothing but grief. If he wasn't a total dimwit he should move on.

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by Anonymous05/24/13

Looks like a boy toy to me

Was he really that dumb to not recognize when he's being used? The only thing left is to move on with his life. He might be able to embarrass her a little if his feelings were hurt but why bother. In the end, she was a manipulative bitch.

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