All Comments on 'Lock The Door'

I think you should write A SEQUEL... quickly!

It was great. There was a lot of detail which is a great thing for a writer but it was too short and it ended so suddenly. Next time there should be more to it or at least a sequel

I'm especially intrigued that these are true stories. You recount them in a very exciting way and, I am interested to see what arises in the aftermath. The fact that Steven went to Carol is encouraging. Now, I'm off to read more of your stories.

Needed proofing and grammar checking.

Has good potential.

"like most girls who are close have experimented sexually to find limits of what we enjoy"

No this is a stereotype that keeps being pushed to have straight girls perform - yes perform lesbian acts for entertainment.

"I asked him why he wanted to meet today and he explained that he could not stop thinking about Saturday and he had masturbated many times."

And there it is leztertainment.