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Keep it coming...this is a good story
Great!
The plot thickens!
Maybe hold back until you can group like 3 chapters together so we have about 3 literotica pages maybe.. Chapters are way too short :(
Deuces &keep up the good work :D
Tommy.
A bit of a toss up
Well, it's a bit of a toss up whether I sent the stuff to be uploaded as soon as it's written or If you'd prefer for me to wait until I've got a few chapters together before I upload it. In the end I guess it doesn't make much of a difference. Thanks for the interest though. I appreciate your comments one way or the other
Talemaster
I don't mind the short chapters...
Normally, it drives me nuts. I'm sort of used to the pacing of this story, though, and I think it works the way you're doing it. (Gives it sort of a documentary/journal feel for me. :)
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