All Comments on 'Candy Afternoon'

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ShavedalloverShavedalloverover 11 years ago
Very HOT!

Love the seduction of two females .Love it!

Jennifer540Jennifer540over 11 years ago
Ladies must read!

A really hot story with a fresh type of lesbian encounter. I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Erotic

Loved it

scarlet_1scarlet_1over 11 years ago
Wow!!

Incredibly hot and sensual.

I loved it!

sheransheranover 11 years ago
wow

wow awesome story..i love this one than ur other stories..great building up..please dont stop this now...keep it as a series..i am eagerly waiting for the next one :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Disliked it do to lack of any female love. The ending was disappointing as it was a long version of "lol kthnx bye".

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
So sensual

You have given us a hot, sexy story of a woman's fantasy fulfilled. Thank you for sharing your talent. I would love to see this turned into a series; there are several possible continuations.

ms_fanny_hillms_fanny_hillover 11 years ago

So hot and intense! Definately luv it!

BrookellBrookellover 11 years ago
Love the loss of control

You built some great images and (SPOILER) having Candy lose control was a wonderful touch. I wonder if Candy will be visiting her again? <hint, hint>.

Thanks for a delightful read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Soaked knickers

So damn hot, author is awesome. I wet my panties reading this and I'm even in a public place and had to resist urge to play with myself while reading this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
what would be great...

i think miranda needs to make candy her mistress. a married woman with her own kept mistress definatly turns the tables on the stereotype that only men have a girlfriend/mistress on the side. i would also want romance/love between the two of them. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wow

This is so hot I thought my laptop was going to burst into flames. More please.

misgoody22misgoody22over 8 years ago
Best story ever

The tribbing was the best part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

I loved this. I've often thought about doing the same thing Miranda did in ordering a stripper for a "Party of one" and seeing what happens. Hopefully if I ever DO act on this fantasy, someone like Candy knocks on my door. Fingers crossed

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meabout 6 years ago

I just had to read this again. It is so fucking delicious. I need a cigarette now.

ROBERTODAVOROBERTODAVOover 5 years ago
Incredibly Hot!

It just goes to show. A paid sex worker can so lost in the experience that she becomes a full participant. A wonderfully erotic story with a good build up and excellent character development.

Robertodavo.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Damn

The whole time i was reading this my pussy kept getting soaked. I couldnt stop rubbing my nipples as i imagined having a stripper tongue my pussy

pranaykathapranaykathaabout 2 years ago

This is a brilliant story of seduction and satisfaction. Loved the way the characters were defined and put to action. The initial hesitation before the hot encounter felt so natural. Both the ladies seemed equally attractive and seductive. Would like to experiment this for sure! - Mandy from India

oxfordseaoxfordsea11 months ago

I do not believe it possible to read this without needing to find mutual release timed with the story.

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