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Making Work a Better Place Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Socially_Inept06/09/12

Nice story.

I would like to see how this story progresses. Please keep it going.

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by Anonymous06/09/12

Wow

Absolutely loved the story, great empowerment an wonderful way of introducing transgender. Peggy needs to develop in another chapter and the potential for a bi mmf threesome in the Bahamas! Loved the sperm kiss at the end, guys i have had actually like it as part f our sex.

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by deanahii06/09/12

where?

where is Ch. 02? loved the story and want to know more bout these three. something is afoot.

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by deanahii06/09/12

agree

i do agree. need to see that Ch. 02.so much fun to be had.

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by Anonymous06/10/12

Good show!!!!

The only thing I would have done different is perhaps demoted Goldman to a secretarial position, with the requirement he do the job after Paulette supervised his transformation, preferably working for a very demanding female boss. That's just me. This is a hell of a well done story and WAY beyond the generic tales that plough the same ground.

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by DesireeFox07/03/13

I guess one

might feel grateful to someone that stopped sexual harassment but to reward them with what they were forced to do I guess it is a possibility. Of course I would never be able to claim harassment as the nymph in me sort of allows for it. Very sexy

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