All Comments on 'A Very Small Thing'

by erotiquenoire

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

please no family fuckfest leave the partners as is just accepted by the parents.

Baloney_PonyBaloney_Ponyalmost 12 years ago
A nice, original story

And the last comment is lame. Why click on an incest story if you don't want to read about incest?

Nitehawk2BearNitehawk2Bearalmost 12 years ago
Continue

Good story. I agree with Baloney's comment by the way. If you do want to continue with another story, I think it should involve all four. Give it a go.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please continue

Continue this story! And it will be great to get the whole family involved with each other!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
A good start

I hope to see more soon.

After he fucks his sister, I hope that he fucks his mom too.

ricksouzaricksouzaalmost 12 years ago
more

i'm with the others. i want this story to keep going until everyone gets to play with everyone else.

MadBrownMadBrownalmost 12 years ago
JUST A SNAPSHOT

Premise of the story was good but extremely unlikely events. It's begging for sequels. After egging on her daughter like she did, the least the bitch mother could have done was fuck him too instead of calling her old man. It's not like she had any objection to incest.

erotiquenoireerotiquenoirealmost 12 years agoAuthor
More to Cum

MadBrown your name suits you well. :-) A good story always leaves the reader wanting more and there will be more to come in this tale. Yes, it does beg for a sequel and I will please. Keep watching in the next few weeks.

kaidmankaidmanalmost 12 years ago
great art of a moment

you have a great story it reminded me of this vid where this one woman was playing a mother of a son and daughter and she had the daughter jack off the son to settle a dispute then she had them have sex to stop their sibling rivalry all in all looking forward to your next chapter you write well and get to the point in a timely manner

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Started ok But headed towards a bit of a flop

The character intractions at the start where good but headed to unrealistic waters when the mom started to Command sexual actions to her children. Although this may be a fetish for few and get something out of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
fine fun story

I'm glad that Peter blew his brotherly balls in his sister's warm wet mouth. Now he should do the same up his mother's warm wet twat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Total Crap

Why do writers think 38 dd tits and 9 inch dicks make good story’s

DocWordsDocWordsabout 3 years ago

Good story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Preposterous and not very erotic

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