Wow, seldom do I see 12 chapters/8 pages all in one story! The best part of this story is the end, when the guy makes his mom pregnant. A sequel to this story wouldn't hurt--a story depicting how the sex evolves as her belly swells; mentioning if the baby is a boy or a girl; & having the mom breast-feed her son, this time in a sexual context.
Realy hot stuff, a plausible plot, build up very nicely without the all too frequent extreme exaggerations in other stories of this genre, leaving enough room for ones own imaginations if one is into it; and I CERTAINLY AM, thank you
this is by far the best storey i have ever read on literotica. fantastic bit of writing
one of the best we ever read. A pleasure to read one so well written
i have read many stories but this is by far the BEST!!!
This length of this story and the depth of the plot was what made this great. You leave no details out and have many scenes. Lots of side story too to get you in the mood, but not so much as to make the story boring. I love it! I only wish it were longer. Very complete story. Job well done.
This story is absolutely great. Whether based upon fact or not, it is extremely realistic as the relationship develops & conflicts are resolved. There was concern & caring by this reader for Sue & Tommy from the very beginning.
you shud continue and show what happens in the future.
thank you for a well written story.
This is the best story I have read!!! I LOVED how you discribed everything in great (but not too great) detail and having so many sences was awsome! The "side stories" where great and you had the perfict amount!, and the ending was excellent! I recemend this story to everyone who likes a sexual story and doesn't find the idea of a mother and son having sex afending and/or appoling. Also, rgjohn, if your reading this I BEG you to write a sequal!!!!
Lots have comments here have expressed the readers praise for your work, I would like to add mine. It is a really great read.The way you explored their emotions, nerves and feelings was terrific. The mothers inner turmoil and supressed desire and the sons youthfull excitement. Culminating in a really sexy series of events, it did excite me very much. Well done to you, from a UK resident.
This is absolutley the best incest story I have ever read.
Not just the best incest story on this site, as has been suggested below, but one of the very finest stories on any subject which has ever been written.
The characters are believable and well-described, and the build-up and tension is extremely well-handled. When the couple do, finally, consummate their love, their couplings are absolutely sizzling. I cannot decide which scene is the most arousing: the one in which they first make love; the one in which Tom "fills his mother's rear hole with his seed" (how elegantly phrased!); or the final chapter, in which the last taboo is broken. All three of these scenes and, indeed, the whole of the story, are quite beautiful.
le souffle au coeur
A very well written story. I want to see more of your work.
The only thing that could top this in my own mind is if it were a father and his very young daughter. This story was spectactular. Had me wet the whole time I read it.
Wonderfull, and so very like my own experiances, when a much younger guy,to this very day I am a little on the kinky side,because of my mother presuring me before we ever made love, to be the little girl she never had,the little skirts and panties that you describe your mother to be wearing, are what my mother would get me to wear about the house when we were alone for the weekend and some times during the week when she had a little to much to drink,Off course this finaly let to us sleeping together,and to this very day i adore wearing skirts and frilly panties. Thank you for a wonderfull story.Regards Bill
I love the way you talk through their thoughts. It's like giving the reader an insight into their minds and what they're thinking.
You do it better than any reader I have read so far (or that I recall anyway).
It really deepens the characters and gives the reader a feel for them, and the emotions they experience.
A longer story, yet never dull, and an endless exploration into their personalities.
Kim (aka doormouse) ;-)
My first lover was my step mother. I was 18 and she was late thirty something. I suppose that I was spoiled from the start...older woman - younger lover - incest kind if thing. Consequently, my appreciation for this story is perhaps somewhat tilted. Great job nonetheless!
He shoud make her pregnant!!
I'm not one for sexual stories (specificly of incest), however, it was very well written. I find the ending most striking, with the simple yet poignant statement "They had finally crossed the line." It is as though the author was showing the relationship between mother and son was perverse rather than one of true love. Many have requested a sequel;however, I feel another chapter in this saga would spoil it.
It was one of the hotest stories on this site. Well written and very discriptive. I swear it made me cum a bunch of times. What we need is more like it.
I have been fantasizing about having sex with mom from last many years. and I love reading the INCEST stories. I have No words to appreciate the way the Stroy has been described. Excelent... Wonderful... Fantastic....
The most sensual and romantic mother-son incest I have ever been reading. Has everything: Romance, love, security, pregnancy etc. Please do continue to write more about Sue&Tommy.
i have had sexual experinces with my mom and we just fucked once but then this opens a whole new world mmm it made me hard...lol plz do write more
Wonderful story! Only one tiny flaw...way too long!
I feel I need to thank you, because of the build-up you give to your readers. You plan your stories beforehand.
I'm female and the way you described them turned me on and made me want to relieve myself. I give it a 100% wow and I only made it to page 3.
It was very well done, I read it four times so far and get hard as hell every time. The discription of the things they did together was so well written, I could see the mother in my brain! it is one of the best stories on this site. Well done. Please write a follow up to it.
This old codger had tears in his eyes at the end!!!!
BAM. Hit the spot. Everything is much sexier if it's taboo isn't it?? HAHAHA.
You're officially one of my favorite writers here on Lit. Good job bro!!
Excellent story - the best I've read so far at this site.
Perhaps, just perhaps, it is real life. Only the author can respond if the story is true or simply great ficton.
The story is fantastic. It would be great if you wrote a sequel to see how they made out and how they raise there kid(s).
I have read only the first page so far but have opted to vote and comment because you are weaving the story wonderfully and not just giving it an erotic facet.
Love making should be romantic and you have done just that. I will be reading the rest too:) :)
A bit more dialogue would have been nice, and personally, the whole pregnancy thing was a bit much.
But structurally, it was very good and a hot read. Good character and plot development.
I loved the entire thing so many authors miss out on the total human reaction. Both the sexual and the mental aspects are covered here. I hope to see more from you in the future..It took me three days to finish reading your wonderful journey..
Thank you. Interesting how love, sex and procreation go together. Thank YOU,
I thought that it was just going to end with the sex 'and they lived happily ever after.' It was different, I'll give you that.
All I can say is wow.
I was thinking of writing my own incest story but after I read this there's no point! I can't see how this could be topped. I really loved how he slowly built up their relationship. How caring the Mother was with her son knowing what she was doing was wrong. But her desire and love for him was to strong to resist. I just wish I could have had a mom like Tom did...
Very hot, and I loved it all, super good, I hope you write more similar stories, maybe bro and sis. Very erotic!
Thank you for writing a well written erotic story about a mother and her son. truly inspiring. Someday I hope to be able to write as well as you do. Please keep up the good work.
This story kept me reading and took me on an emotional rollercoaster. I really enjoyed it. Keep them cumming.
A wonderfully story
The absolute BEST I have ever read in my life. It really moved me and I am very glad that you wrote this story.
On a scale of 1-10, I would have to say, about 99 billion.
This was a fantastic story and you followed it well. The only thing I seem to caught that I would have liked to have seen explored maybe a bit more was sue's submissive side coming out more. You had in there ( at the top of page 6 ) that it felt right and i kinda expected her to maybe explore that side of herself and that tommy after doing that would explore it as well.
All in all it was a great story tho!!
Plot, characters, time-frame, chronologically correct... held my attention as well as any Grisham or Clancy novel, and never disappointed. When's the next one? lol
Nice Story - VERY erotic
this is the sexiesyt thing I have ever read.It should be made into a movie,with proper direction it would be a smash hit!!
this has to be the best incest story iv read so far, its like you are standing there in the room seeing this going on and then being part of the story yourself , great writing do hope there is going to be a follow up to this story there must be a lot more to write about mom and son, even bringing in more people such as friends and other,s
im shaw you dont need me to tell you how to write after reading this great story, keep up the good writing, love every bit of it, one last word to say it all fantastic.
This is the most hottest and sexiest incest stories I have ever read in my life.
god it was great! i loved every minute of it! so intense and down to earth...it felt so real. i felt lik i was watching a movie and came to tears at times....and cummed hard ant times....GOD! jus a great story!
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