All Comments on 'Pool Boy Gets Dressed Up Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

absolutely brilliant story, perfect fantasy material

please keep writing more :)

STUGPOLESTUGPOLEalmost 12 years ago
enjoyed the story and a thought

enjoying the story and can't wait for the next installment.

how about adding a blonde wig to Brandy?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Turning out Brandy

Love how he is being slowly transformed into a little slut and doesn't realize it. I'm looking forward to reading about Brandy having her tight little pussy trained for Don (and others)!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love love love

Love!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great

Please keep this going :) I want Brandy in a dress bad!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Brandy's such a fine gurl

Mistress Debra should get Brandy fired and offer the sissy a job licking clean the freshly-fucked pussies of her girlfriends.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wonderful

Keep the story line going .....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
AWESOME

GREAT STORY, CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great story please keep writing

love the story idea and you are such a great writer

pammycakes13pammycakes13almost 12 years ago

and, i want sissy Brandy with some nice implanted titties....great story and so well written...a pleasure to read, with such great rhythm and flow!!

pammycakes13pammycakes13almost 12 years ago

and, of course on some nice female hormones too. xoxo

honeysluthoneyslutalmost 12 years ago
Great job!

You did a great job of expressing the ultimate fantasy of so many of us. An older woman, lots of silky caresses and someone to show us who we are. Please continue with another chapter. I am dying to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
What must come next

A great start. Now Mistress Deborah should put a dress on Brandy. Then, an absolute must, she must fit very high heeled slut shoes on her feet. Now Brandy can parade around the room in front of her while she masturbates.

I'm sure Mistress Deborah has a toy collection. She has prepared Brandy's ass so now its time to bend her over, flip up her dress, and take her from behind while wearing one of her strap-on dildos.

This is what my Mistress does to me. Often.

Pretty Paula,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
All Dressed Up

Not quite! These females need footwear too. Some patent leather fuck me pumps with 5 1/2" stiletto heels would work real well!

betabradbetabradabout 11 years ago
Very Sexy !

Although I just look an average guy - not sissy or effemintate ( and slightly overweight) I admit I have many fantasies like this - of a sexy woman turning me in to her little sissy slut. Very hot beginning , i look forward to reading the rest and (hopefully ) seeing the main character learn to suck cock and lick creampies .. mmmm yummmmmm.

jojo9696jojo9696over 10 years ago
oh fuck

Tony u got me hard and wet and big again. wot am i gonna do with these 8 inches? onto chap 2 i guess - dont think il get to the end......

partsman134partsman134about 10 years ago
Very hot

Yet another smoken hot story by you.

KateCDTXKateCDTXover 8 years ago
My Fantasy

I wear Speedos and cross dress, so this is my perfect fantasy. I can't wait to read more of Brandie's exploits.

SusanlynnSusanlynnalmost 8 years ago
Too hot

This was my favorite fantasy when I was a teenager. To be dressed as a girl by an older married woman and turned into a cock sucking sissy faggot for her and her husband. Have her ask me " do you want to eat my pussy and drink my juice or suck my husband's cock and eat his sperm?" My reply, " I want to suck your husband's cock and eat his sperm." " Fuck me and cum inside me or have my husband fuck you and cum inside you?" Have your husband fuck me and cum in me." The older married woman part never came true but today I have my own husband to suck and fuck and all the sperm I want. I'm such a horny sissy cum slut wife!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Brandy is ready

I would love to clean Debra's pool everyday.

marriedsissymarriedsissyover 6 years ago
Caged

Ohh my little clitty is straining to get out of its cage. This story makes me want stroke and cum but i can’t.

Skidoo800Skidoo800about 3 years ago
πŸ‘Œ awesome πŸ‘Œ

Love it always was a fantasy 0f mine thanks

MrKachingMrKachingalmost 3 years ago

This is the hottest seduction to tranny story I have ever read. It moves well and I like the forced cum eating, pussy licking and anal dooching. I can't wait to read the sequel:-)

SissyCrissy6245SissyCrissy6245over 2 years ago

Ohhh Myyyyy, this has to be one of the most descriptive, erotic Feminization Stories that Crissy's ever cumm across. Brandy/Brandon took to hur gurly "frillies" like all good Sissies should. Mistress Debra will mold Brandy into the pretty "little BarbieDoll" Lesbian Gurlfriend that he's always desired. Crissy's ready with a dresser full of fresh Panties and Lingerie for the next chapters. My tumescent clittycock is "ready" for more of this SeXy Thread too....Mmmm!!! ;-

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

loved it wish i was the pool guy

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Totally Brilliant! I haven’t seen something this intensely hot in years and this is going to be a #1 reread forever. I would be amazed if I came across anything close to this impressive piece of work. No need to use imagination with something like this stoke the fires and gets the pulse pounding. What more can be said once you find your holy grail of seductive stories.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Awesome just awesome. I’m so hard and wet thanks. Now part 2

liz33ndliz33nd8 months ago

talented writer, well told in a believable way.

twidxtwidx7 months ago

great introduction, lets hope for more exciting episodes

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