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Ok, hooked
I love this story. The tale that you have tols is magnificent. Thank you for writing this. IR2R
Great...
I am still loving it and I do realize that making it so erotic it what a lot of authors do, but it takes the reality out of the romance you are describing. I just don't believe it anymore. Not all of us want an unrealistic stroke story. It is either romance or erotica.
Would it be too much to ask...
For her mother to offer an apology for the way she went completely overboard and tried and found him guilty with no evidence whatsoever? Or is that just me?
i like your story
read the whole thing, didnt realy like the last part. a piece of advice: with so little 'stuf' going on you might want to describe the 'scenes' in a little more detail.
for the rest i think you provide a lot of realism without describing much and you dont go overboard with bullshit.
all in all i realy liked your story.
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