I don't know why but I have a major soft spot for cowboys. This was a great first chapter, I can't wait for the next installment.
Please don't keep us waiting!
Great start, I really enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for more
Echo - Nice start, looking forward to the rest of the chapters. Good early development of three main characters, which is essential to a strong story line.
Love it! Please continue... AWESOME START:)
To my loyal readers: Ch 2 has been submitted! It should be published in a few days. I plan on posting a new chapter every couple of weeks.
Loses so much due to lack of an objective editor.
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Loved it!
I don't know why but I have a major soft spot for cowboys. This was a great first chapter, I can't wait for the next installment.
Great start
Please don't keep us waiting!
Great start
Great start, I really enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for more
Echo - Nice start, looking forward to the rest of the chapters. Good early development of three main characters, which is essential to a strong story line.
Love it! Please continue... AWESOME START:)
Ch 2 Sent In
To my loyal readers: Ch 2 has been submitted! It should be published in a few days. I plan on posting a new chapter every couple of weeks.
Editing !
Loses so much due to lack of an objective editor.
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More submissions by LadyRoscoe.