All Comments on 'Something Unexpected Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

good start - keep up the good work

falllove69falllove69almost 12 years ago
dont stop writing

i cant wait to read more good so far

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

damn, can't wait to see how the story continues!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hello PoeticallyPersonified. Yes, chapter 02 is much better..

Maybe there's more to this story than just a very sexy writer?

Lesbian, Sundari.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A Good Start and Well Written!

Hallo PP,

This is turning into a very interesting story,,, can't wait to read chapter 3..

Thank-you,

Gay Kat.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissy8 months ago

Oh my, what a jerk this ex, sending a friend to kick her ass, god this male ego must be smashed ….. back to the sapphic love and the girls, this was fun to read …. What i don’t agree with is alcohol and the excesses coming with ….. alcohol is a devilish drug and i see this scenario happen in the club as borderline act, because if a man would have done such it would be rape

Still five stars ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🍀

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Hi my loves, I'm currently working on a few stories so here is the breakdown: Daddy's Little Switch: African-American romance with bdsm themes The Seven: Anila - Interracial, Sci-fi Futa :-) The Seven: Secret Spinoff #1: Futa on everyone :-) The Seven: Secret Spinoff #2: Lesb...

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